Index: general/graphlib/libpng/libpng.ent
===================================================================
--- general/graphlib/libpng/libpng.ent	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ general/graphlib/libpng/libpng.ent	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@
 <!ENTITY libpng-desc SYSTEM "libpng-desc.xml">
 <!ENTITY libpng-version "1.2.5">
-<!ENTITY libpng-download-http "http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/sourceforge/libpng/libpng-&libpng-version;.tar.bz2">
+<!ENTITY libpng-download-http "http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/libpng/libpng-&libpng-version;.tar.bz2">
 <!ENTITY libpng-download-ftp "ftp://ftp.iasi.roedu.net/pub/mirrors/ftp.gimp.org/gimp/libs/libpng-&libpng-version;.tar.bz2">
 <!ENTITY libpng-size "376 KB">
Index: kde/core/arts/arts-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- kde/core/arts/arts-exp.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ kde/core/arts/arts-exp.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -3,6 +3,6 @@
 <para><parameter>--prefix=&kde-dir;</parameter> : This option tells the
 process to install the package in <filename
-class="directory">&kde-dir;</filename>. We put aRts here because this
-package is required before installing <acronym>KDE</acronym>.</para>
+class="directory">&kde-dir;</filename>. aRts is installed here as it's
+required before installing <acronym>KDE</acronym>.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--disable-debug</parameter> : This option causes the
Index: kde/core/pre-install-config.xml
===================================================================
--- kde/core/pre-install-config.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ kde/core/pre-install-config.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -19,5 +19,5 @@
 
 <para>If you are not installing <acronym>KDE</acronym> in
-<filename class="directory">/usr</filename> you will need to make some
+<filename class="directory">/usr</filename>, you will need to make some
 configuration changes:</para>
 
@@ -49,6 +49,6 @@
 <tip>
 <para>If you prefer installing <acronym>KDE</acronym> in
-<filename class="directory">/opt</filename>
-one trick to avoid the above configuration changes every time you
+<filename class="directory">/opt</filename>, one trick to avoid the
+above configuration changes every time you
 install the new version is to replace
 <filename class="directory">/opt/kde-&kde-version;</filename>
Index: kde/kde-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- kde/kde-intro.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ kde/kde-intro.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -3,13 +3,13 @@
 
 <para><acronym>KDE</acronym> is a comprehensive desktop environment that builds on 
-<application>XFree86</application> and <application>Qt</application> to provide
+<application>X</application> Window System and <application>Qt</application> to provide
 a window manager and many user tools, including a browser, word processor, 
 spreadsheet, presentation package, games, and numerous other utilities. It 
 provides extensive capabilities for customization.</para>
 
-<para>We divide the <acronym>KDE</acronym> instructions into two parts. The first part, the
+<para>The <acronym>KDE</acronym> instructions are divided into two parts. The first part, the
 core packages, are needed for the rest of <acronym>KDE</acronym> to work. The second part
 presents additional packages which provide functionality in various areas
-(multimedia, graphics etc).</para> 
+(multimedia, graphics, etc.).</para> 
 
 <para>There are two alternatives for installing <acronym>KDE</acronym>. Option one, that
Index: multimedia/audioutils/lame/lame.ent
===================================================================
--- multimedia/audioutils/lame/lame.ent	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ multimedia/audioutils/lame/lame.ent	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -5,5 +5,5 @@
 <!ENTITY lame-desc SYSTEM "lame-desc.xml">
 <!ENTITY lame-version "3.95.1">
-<!ENTITY lame-download-http "http://telia.dl.sourceforge.net/sourceforge/lame/lame-&lame-version;.tar.gz">
+<!ENTITY lame-download-http "http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/lame/lame-&lame-version;.tar.gz">
 <!ENTITY lame-download-ftp " ">
 <!ENTITY lame-size "1.2 MB">
Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools.ent
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools.ent	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools.ent	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -5,5 +5,5 @@
 <!ENTITY udftools-desc SYSTEM "udftools-desc.xml">
 <!ENTITY udftools-version "1.0.0b2">
-<!ENTITY udftools-download-http "http://aleron.dl.sourceforge.net/sourceforge/linux-udf/udftools-&udftools-version;.tar.gz">
+<!ENTITY udftools-download-http "http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/linux-udf/udftools-&udftools-version;.tar.gz">
 <!ENTITY udftools-download-ftp " ">
 <!ENTITY udftools-size "236 Kb">
Index: x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-config.xml
===================================================================
--- x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-config.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-config.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -16,6 +16,6 @@
 <filename class="directory">lesstif-&lesstif-version;/test</filename>.  It is not
 required to install any of the resulting binaries to validate the
-installation, the following commands, executed from the source
-directory, will suffice:</para>
+installation. The following commands executed from the source
+directory will suffice:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>cd test &amp;&amp;
Index: x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-desc.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-desc.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -12,5 +12,5 @@
 <para><application>LessTif</application> libraries are an
 <application>OSF/Motif(R)</application> source code compatible
-library for <application>X</application> Window System.</para></sect3>
+library for the <application>X</application> Window System.</para></sect3>
 
 
Index: x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-exp.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/lib/lesstif/lesstif-exp.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para><option>sed -i 's@$(prefix)/LessTif@$(prefix)/share/LessTif@g'</option>:
-This moves the location of non-FHS compliant <filename class="directory">/usr/LessTif</filename>
+This moves the location of the non-FHS compliant <filename class="directory">/usr/LessTif</filename>
 directory to <filename class="directory">/usr/share/LessTif</filename>.</para>
 
Index: x/lib/pango/pango-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- x/lib/pango/pango-inst.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/lib/pango/pango-inst.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -4,7 +4,9 @@
 <para>In order for <application>Pango</application> to find
 <application>Xft</application>, the <envar>PKG_CONFIG_PATH</envar> must 
-include <filename class="directory">/usr/X11R6/lib/pkgconfig</filename>.  This is a good place to
-add it if you haven't already. Specific instructions for modifying this
-variable can be found in the configuration section of <xref linkend="pkgconfig"/>.</para>
+include <filename class="directory">/usr/X11R6/lib/pkgconfig</filename>.
+This is a good time to
+add it if you haven't already. You can utilize the example for
+<filename>X.sh</filename> to create a script for modifying this
+variable located in the section <xref linkend="postlfs-config-profile"/>.</para>
 
 <para>Install <application>Pango</application> by running the following commands:</para>
Index: x/lib/qt.xml
===================================================================
--- x/lib/qt.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/lib/qt.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -96,5 +96,5 @@
 has the advantage of keeping all the package files consolidated in a dedicated directory
 hierarchy.  By using this method, an update can be made without overwriting a previous 
-installation and users can easily back up to a previous version by changing one symbolic
+installation and users can easily revert back to a previous version by changing one symbolic
 link.</para>
 
@@ -176,5 +176,5 @@
 
 <para><parameter>-system-zlib -system-libpng</parameter>: This switch
-forces the library to use the shared libraries that are on your system
+forces the linker to use the shared libraries that are on your system
 instead of recreating its own set of support libraries for these
 functions.</para>
@@ -187,5 +187,5 @@
 
 <para><command>find -type f -name Makefile | xargs sed -i "s@-Wl,-rpath,/usr/lib@@g"</command>:
-This command removes hardcoded run-time path, else
+This command removes hardcoded run-time paths, else
 <command>uic</command> tries to run with system installed Qt
 libraries.</para>
@@ -219,6 +219,6 @@
 
 <para>The <application>Qt</application>/<application>X11</application>
-library contains <acronym>API</acronym>'s necessary to use
-programs based on Qt <acronym>GUI</acronym> toolkit.</para>
+library contains <acronym>API</acronym>s necessary to use
+programs based on the Qt <acronym>GUI</acronym> toolkit.</para>
 
 <para>The <application>Qt</application> package contains 
Index: x/wm/fluxbox/fluxbox-config.xml
===================================================================
--- x/wm/fluxbox/fluxbox-config.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/wm/fluxbox/fluxbox-config.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -21,5 +21,5 @@
 cp /usr/share/fluxbox/menu ~/.fluxbox/menu </command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>Menu Items are added by editing<filename>~/.fluxbox/menu</filename>. The 
+<para>Menu Items are added by editing <filename>~/.fluxbox/menu</filename>. The 
 syntax is explained on the fluxbox man page.</para>
 </sect3>
Index: x/wm/wm.xml
===================================================================
--- x/wm/wm.xml	(revision 7df21b30a689b727e3cba4c4c5d61fc775f925c3)
+++ x/wm/wm.xml	(revision dcd80728f17793f6da774347c21a580ae427e4f8)
@@ -34,5 +34,6 @@
 several Window Managers and one lightweight Desktop Environment are
 presented.  Later in the book, both <application><acronym>KDE</acronym></application> and
-<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> have their own Parts.</para>
+<application><acronym>GNOME</acronym></application> have their own
+sections.</para>
 </sect1>
 
