Changeset df98db6 for xsoft

Timestamp:

06/04/2004 04:17:42 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

21eeb86

Parents:

96ee548

Message:

xsoft grammar fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2266 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

xsoft/graphweb

Files:

• dillo/dillo-intro.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• dillo/dillo.ent (modified) (1 diff)
• mozilla/mozilla-config.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• mozilla/mozilla-desc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• mozilla/mozilla-inst.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• mozilla/mozilla-intro.xml (modified) (1 diff)

xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo-intro.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para><application>Dillo</application> is a fast, small footprint graphical 
-browser.  Although version &dillo-version; is alpha code, it is stable.
+browser.  Version &dillo-version; is now considered a stable beta.
 <application>Dillo</application> does not support
 <application>Java</application> or JavaScript, and the current version does 

xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo.ent

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <!ENTITY dillo-config SYSTEM "dillo-config.xml">
 <!ENTITY dillo-desc SYSTEM "dillo-desc.xml">
-<!ENTITY dillo-version "0.8.0">
+<!ENTITY dillo-version "0.8.1">
 <!ENTITY dillo-download-http "http://www.dillo.org/download/dillo-&dillo-version;.tar.bz2">
 <!ENTITY dillo-download-ftp "ftp://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/Linux/distributions/sorcerer/sources/dillo/&dillo-version;/dillo-&dillo-version;.tar.bz2">

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-config.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para>No specific configuration is required as long as the <command>mozilla
 </command> binary is in the path for the user. If <application>Mozilla</application>
-is installed in a non-standard location, then make a sym-link to the 
+is installed in a non-standard location, then make a symlink to the 
 <command>mozilla</command> binary from <filename class="directory">/usr/bin</filename>.
-Same thing applies for <application>Mozilla Firefox</application> and
+The same thing applies for <application>Mozilla Firefox</application> and
 <application>Mozilla Thunderbird</application>.</para>
 

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-desc.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Contents</title>
 
-<para>The <application>Mozilla</application> package contains <command>mozilla
-</command>.The various components such as composer, mail-news can be accessed 
+<para>The <application>Mozilla</application> package contains
+<command>mozilla</command>.The various components such as composer and mail-news can be accessed 
 from the menu after <command>mozilla</command> starts or via command-line 
 switches to the <command>mozilla</command> binary.

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para><screen><command>export MOZILLA_OFFICIAL="1" &amp;&amp;
 export BUILD_OFFICIAL="1"</command></screen>
-Set some variables that affect what and how it is built. The first two exports
+Set some variables that affect what and how the packages is built. The first two exports
 specify that we are building a distribution.</para>
 
@@ -13 +13 @@
 
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter>: Previously mozilla did
-not support the make install option. Hence the package was installed in 
+not support the make install option. Hence, the package was installed in 
 <filename>/opt</filename>. The package now supports "make install" and follows 
-the <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines for installation. Hence the book now 
+the <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines for installation. Therefore the book now 
 recommends installation in a system wide prefix such as <filename>/usr
 </filename>.</para>
 
 <para><screen><option>--enable-toolkit-gtk2</option></screen>Use gtk2
-toolkit</para>
+toolkit.</para>
 
 <para><screen><option>--with-system-zlib --with-system-jpeg \
@@ -65 +65 @@
 <para><command>ln -nsf mozilla-&mozilla-version; ...</command>:
 <application>Mozilla</application> installs headers and libraries in version 
-specific directories. This link makes symbolic links so that applications that 
+specific directories. This command makes symbolic links so that applications that 
 depend on <application>Mozilla</application> (such as <application>OpenOffice
 </application>, <application>Galeon</application>, etc.) don't need to know 
@@ -77 +77 @@
 </screen>
 Create the required component registries to enable multi-user installs. These
-steps should be repeated each time a mozilla add-on is installed as root
-to allow normal users to run mozilla.</para>
+steps should be preformed by the root user each time a mozilla add-on is
+installed. This will allow normal users to run mozilla.</para>
 
 </sect2>

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-inst.xml

@@ -64 +64 @@
 <para>Some libraries installed by mozilla are also needed by other packages. These
 libraries should be in <filename>/usr/lib</filename> so that other packages can
-link against these. Move them as follows:</para>
+link against them. Move them as follows:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>for i in lib{nspr4,plc4,plds4,nss3,smime3,softokn3,ssl3}.so libsoftokn3.chk
@@ -96 +96 @@
 <para><option>--enable-elf-dynstr-gc</option>: Removes un-referenced
 strings from <acronym>ELF</acronym> shared objects generated during the build. 
-Note that this option breaks build on alpha.</para>
+Note that this option breaks the build on alpha.</para>
 
 <para><option>--disable-mailnews</option>: Disable the mail and news
@@ -102 +102 @@
 
 <para><option>--disable-ldap</option>: Disable <acronym>LDAP</acronym> 
-Support, recommended if mail is disabled.</para>
+support, recommended if mail is disabled.</para>
 
 <para><option>--enable-calendar</option>: Build the calendar client.</para>

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-intro.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 composer, mail client, a calendar client and an <acronym>IRC</acronym> client.</para>
 
-<para>The Mozilla project also hosts two subprojects that aim to cater to the needs
+<para>The Mozilla project also hosts two subprojects that aim to satisfiy the needs
 of users who don't need the complete browser suite or like to have separate applications
 for browsing and e-mail. These subprojects are