Changeset df98db6 for xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml

Timestamp:

06/04/2004 04:17:42 PM (20 years ago)

Author:

Larry Lawrence <larry@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.2, 6.2.0, 6.2.0-rc1, 6.2.0-rc2, 6.3, 6.3-rc1, 6.3-rc2, 6.3-rc3, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, v5_1, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

21eeb86

Parents:

96ee548

Message:

xsoft grammar fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@2266 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para><screen><command>export MOZILLA_OFFICIAL="1" &amp;&amp;
 export BUILD_OFFICIAL="1"</command></screen>
-Set some variables that affect what and how it is built. The first two exports
+Set some variables that affect what and how the packages is built. The first two exports
 specify that we are building a distribution.</para>
 
@@ -13 +13 @@
 
 <para><parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter>: Previously mozilla did
-not support the make install option. Hence the package was installed in 
+not support the make install option. Hence, the package was installed in 
 <filename>/opt</filename>. The package now supports "make install" and follows 
-the <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines for installation. Hence the book now 
+the <acronym>FHS</acronym> guidelines for installation. Therefore the book now 
 recommends installation in a system wide prefix such as <filename>/usr
 </filename>.</para>
 
 <para><screen><option>--enable-toolkit-gtk2</option></screen>Use gtk2
-toolkit</para>
+toolkit.</para>
 
 <para><screen><option>--with-system-zlib --with-system-jpeg \
@@ -65 +65 @@
 <para><command>ln -nsf mozilla-&mozilla-version; ...</command>:
 <application>Mozilla</application> installs headers and libraries in version 
-specific directories. This link makes symbolic links so that applications that 
+specific directories. This command makes symbolic links so that applications that 
 depend on <application>Mozilla</application> (such as <application>OpenOffice
 </application>, <application>Galeon</application>, etc.) don't need to know 
@@ -77 +77 @@
 </screen>
 Create the required component registries to enable multi-user installs. These
-steps should be repeated each time a mozilla add-on is installed as root
-to allow normal users to run mozilla.</para>
+steps should be preformed by the root user each time a mozilla add-on is
+installed. This will allow normal users to run mozilla.</para>
 
 </sect2>