Index: index.xml
===================================================================
--- index.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ index.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
"http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.3/docbookx.dtd" [
-
-
-
+
+
+
Index: introduction/welcome/credits.xml
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--- introduction/welcome/credits.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ introduction/welcome/credits.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -268,4 +268,8 @@
the book.
+Randy McMurchy for writing the
+Heimdal hint and for proofreading the book from cover to cover for
+grammatical errors.
+
Index: xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo-intro.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo-intro.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
Dillo is a fast, small footprint graphical
-browser. Although version &dillo-version; is alpha code, it is stable.
+browser. Version &dillo-version; is now considered a stable beta.
Dillo does not support
Java or JavaScript, and the current version does
Index: xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo.ent
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--- xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo.ent (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/dillo/dillo.ent (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
-
+
Index: xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-config.xml
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--- xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-config.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-config.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
No specific configuration is required as long as the mozilla
binary is in the path for the user. If Mozilla
-is installed in a non-standard location, then make a sym-link to the
+is installed in a non-standard location, then make a symlink to the
mozilla binary from /usr/bin.
-Same thing applies for Mozilla Firefox and
+The same thing applies for Mozilla Firefox and
Mozilla Thunderbird.
Index: xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-desc.xml
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--- xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-desc.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-desc.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@
Contents
-The Mozilla package contains mozilla
-.The various components such as composer, mail-news can be accessed
+The Mozilla package contains
+mozilla.The various components such as composer and mail-news can be accessed
from the menu after mozilla starts or via command-line
switches to the mozilla binary.
Index: xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml
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--- xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-exp.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
export MOZILLA_OFFICIAL="1" &&
export BUILD_OFFICIAL="1"
-Set some variables that affect what and how it is built. The first two exports
+Set some variables that affect what and how the packages is built. The first two exports
specify that we are building a distribution.
@@ -13,12 +13,12 @@
--prefix=/usr: Previously mozilla did
-not support the make install option. Hence the package was installed in
+not support the make install option. Hence, the package was installed in
/opt. The package now supports "make install" and follows
-the FHS guidelines for installation. Hence the book now
+the FHS guidelines for installation. Therefore the book now
recommends installation in a system wide prefix such as /usr
.Use gtk2
-toolkit
+toolkit.
Create the required component registries to enable multi-user installs. These
-steps should be repeated each time a mozilla add-on is installed as root
-to allow normal users to run mozilla.
+steps should be preformed by the root user each time a mozilla add-on is
+installed. This will allow normal users to run mozilla.
Index: xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-inst.xml
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--- xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-inst.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-inst.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -64,5 +64,5 @@
Some libraries installed by mozilla are also needed by other packages. These
libraries should be in /usr/lib so that other packages can
-link against these. Move them as follows:
+link against them. Move them as follows:for i in lib{nspr4,plc4,plds4,nss3,smime3,softokn3,ssl3}.so libsoftokn3.chk
@@ -96,5 +96,5 @@
: Removes un-referenced
strings from ELF shared objects generated during the build.
-Note that this option breaks build on alpha.
+Note that this option breaks the build on alpha.
: Disable the mail and news
@@ -102,5 +102,5 @@
: Disable LDAP
-Support, recommended if mail is disabled.
+support, recommended if mail is disabled.: Build the calendar client.
Index: xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-intro.xml
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--- xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-intro.xml (revision 96ee5481522dae96ec6fd22fe06ce25fb6bc7ed8)
+++ xsoft/graphweb/mozilla/mozilla-intro.xml (revision df98db6fc1aec4d1a4d2ee80194a690653572ba9)
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@
composer, mail client, a calendar client and an IRC client.
-The Mozilla project also hosts two subprojects that aim to cater to the needs
+The Mozilla project also hosts two subprojects that aim to satisfiy the needs
of users who don't need the complete browser suite or like to have separate applications
for browsing and e-mail. These subprojects are