Changeset e3cde1fc for server/databases

Timestamp:

08/26/2024 05:54:46 PM (4 weeks ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

12.2, lazarus, trunk

Children:

7fda222

Parents:

2f2568e

Message:

postgresql: minor text tweaks

File:

• server/databases/postgresql.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

server/databases/postgresql.xml

@@ -155 +155 @@
       to follow. If the major version of the new build is greater than the
       previous version, there is a chance that the data file format has changed.
-      new software cannot act on the existing data files. In this case, the
+      New software cannot use the existing data files. In this case, the
       server will not start because the old programs have been overwritten, so
       the data is unavailable until it's file format has been converted.</para>
@@ -164 +164 @@
         during the upgrade. Note that new major versions might use a different
         binary format in the data objects, causing potential incompatibilities.
-        For more information, check out upstream's documentation about
-        upgrading PostgreSQL here.
+        For more information, please review upstream's documentation about
+        upgrading PostgreSQL here:
         <ulink url="https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/upgrading.html"/>.
       </para>
@@ -221 +221 @@
       <filename class="directory">/srv/pgsql/data</filename>, and the new data
       is in <filename class="directory">/srv/pgsql/newdata</filename>.
-      Backing up the old database files is suggested before continuing.</para>
+      Backing up the old database files is recommended before continuing.</para>
 
       <para>Next, remove the old database files, and rename the new data
@@ -305 +305 @@
     <para>
       <option>--with-python</option>: builds the PL/Python server-side
-      language. Python3 is used by default, Python2 is no longer supported.
+      language.
     </para>
 
@@ -876 +876 @@
             requires the
             <ulink url="https://flightaware.github.io/Pgtcl/">Pgtcl</ulink>
-            package to be installed too
+            package to be installed
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="postgresql pltcl_loadmod">