Changeset e6fb085

Timestamp:

10/19/2017 04:45:35 PM (7 years ago)

Author:

Douglas R. Reno <renodr@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 12.2, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gimp3, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, lazarus, lxqt, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/for-12.3, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/spidermonkey128, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

0fe4cbe

Parents:

93f15e1

Message:

Nitpicks and typos
Also, my returning commit

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@19347 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Files:

• general/graphlib/poppler.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general/sysutils/pax.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• networking/netutils/whois.xml (modified) (1 diff)

general/graphlib/poppler.xml

@@ -191 +191 @@
 
     <para>
-      If uou have Qt installed, again as the  
+      If you have Qt installed, again as the  
       <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user:
     </para>

general/sysutils/pax.xml

@@ -150 +150 @@
       <seglistitem>
         <seg>
-          pax.
+          pax
         </seg>
       </seglistitem>

general/sysutils/pm-utils.xml

@@ -32 +32 @@
     <para>
       The <application>Power Management Utilities</application> is a small
-      collection of scripts to suspend and hibernate computer that can be used
+      collection of scripts to suspend and hibernate a computer that can be used
       to run user supplied scripts on suspend and resume.
     </para>

networking/netutils/whois.xml

@@ -142 +142 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            generate new password, optionally apply it to a user.
+            generates a new password, and optionally applies it to a user.
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="whois mkpasswd-whois">