Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml	(revision a2d48f42e9beaa74dc51705172007b8fc979fbc7)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml	(revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@
 
 <para>When configuring your connection, you will need to have your 
-ISPs nameserver information availible , as well as your username and 
-password.  You will also be asked wether you want to configure a
-dial-on-demand or a constant connection.  If your service provider does
-not charge by the minute, it is usually good to have a bootscript handle 
-the connection for you.  You can, of course, choose not to install the 
+ISP's nameserver information availible, as well as your username and 
+password.  You will also be asked whether to configure a dial-on-demand 
+or a constant connection.  If your service provider does not charge by 
+the minute, it is usually good to have a bootscript handle the 
+connection for you.  You can, of course, choose not to install the 
 following script, and start your connection manually with the 
 <filename>adsl-start</filename> script.</para>
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml	(revision a2d48f42e9beaa74dc51705172007b8fc979fbc7)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml	(revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
 
 <sect3><title>adsl-status</title><para>Displays the status of the adsl 
-connection</para></sect3>
+connection.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>adsl-stop</title><para>Stops the client.</para></sect3>
 
-<sect3><title>pppoe</title><para>This is the actual client itself.
-Generally it should not be started on it's own</para></sect3>
+<sect3><title>pppoe</title><para>This is the client itself.
+Generally it should not be started on it's own.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>pppoe-relay</title><para>Starts the server relay 
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml	(revision a2d48f42e9beaa74dc51705172007b8fc979fbc7)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml	(revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para>These are the standard instalation commands that will install into
+<para>These are the standard installation commands that will install into
 the <userinput>/usr</userinput> prefix.  You can optionally use the 
 <userinput>'go'</userinput> script in the root of the source tree, to
-run the exact same commands, which are then, imediately followed by the 
+run the exact same commands, which are then, immediately followed by the 
 <userinput>adsl-setup</userinput> script.</para>
 
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml	(revision a2d48f42e9beaa74dc51705172007b8fc979fbc7)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml	(revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
 ./configure &amp;&amp;
 make &amp;&amp;
-make install &amp;&amp;</userinput></screen></para>
+make install</userinput></screen></para>
 
 </sect2>
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml	(revision a2d48f42e9beaa74dc51705172007b8fc979fbc7)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml	(revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@
 Estimated Disk space required:  &pppoe-buildsize;</screen>
 
-<para>The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client, and a 
-userspace server componenet that runs works with the client. The 
-client allows you to connect to large networks that use the PPPoE protocol, 
-common among ADSL providers.  The server component runs along side the 
-client, allowing you configure other clients that send out a configuration 
+<para>The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client and a 
+server componenet that works with the client. The client allows you 
+to connect to large networks that use the PPPoE protocol, common among 
+ADSL providers.  The server component runs along side the client, 
+allowing you to configure other clients that send out a configuration 
 request.</para>
 
@@ -19,7 +19,9 @@
 
 <para>In addition, if you plan to use demand dialing, or kernel mode
-PPPoE, you need to patch ppp-2.4.1 and re-install.</para>
-<para>The patch can be downloaded from here: 
-<ulink url="&hfile-root;/ppp-2.4.1-pppoe-4.patch"/></para>
+PPPoE, you need to patch ppp-2.4.1 and re-install using the standard
+BLFS instructions.  The patch can be downloaded from here: 
+<ulink url="&hfile-root;/ppp-2.4.1-pppoe-4.patch"/>.   Additional
+information about kernel mode PPPoE can be found in 
+<filename>rp-pppoe-3.5/doc/KERNEL-MODE-PPPOE</filename>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
