Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml
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--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml (revision 0a1f247b16168f6045d841d9b5699bb742b5343c)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-config.xml (revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@
When configuring your connection, you will need to have your
-ISPs nameserver information availible , as well as your username and
-password. You will also be asked wether you want to configure a
-dial-on-demand or a constant connection. If your service provider does
-not charge by the minute, it is usually good to have a bootscript handle
-the connection for you. You can, of course, choose not to install the
+ISP's nameserver information availible, as well as your username and
+password. You will also be asked whether to configure a dial-on-demand
+or a constant connection. If your service provider does not charge by
+the minute, it is usually good to have a bootscript handle the
+connection for you. You can, of course, choose not to install the
following script, and start your connection manually with the
adsl-start script.
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml
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--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml (revision 0a1f247b16168f6045d841d9b5699bb742b5343c)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-desc.xml (revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
adsl-statusDisplays the status of the adsl
-connection
+connection.
adsl-stopStops the client.
-pppoeThis is the actual client itself.
-Generally it should not be started on it's own
+pppoeThis is the client itself.
+Generally it should not be started on it's own.
pppoe-relayStarts the server relay
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml
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--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml (revision 0a1f247b16168f6045d841d9b5699bb742b5343c)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-exp.xml (revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -2,8 +2,8 @@
Command explanations
-These are the standard instalation commands that will install into
+These are the standard installation commands that will install into
the /usr prefix. You can optionally use the
'go' script in the root of the source tree, to
-run the exact same commands, which are then, imediately followed by the
+run the exact same commands, which are then, immediately followed by the
adsl-setup script.
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml
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--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml (revision 0a1f247b16168f6045d841d9b5699bb742b5343c)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-inst.xml (revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
./configure &&
make &&
-make install &&
+make install
Index: connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml
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--- connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml (revision 0a1f247b16168f6045d841d9b5699bb742b5343c)
+++ connect/other/pppoe/pppoe-intro.xml (revision e76c814661d4f0d738acb85aed5c71d9f5333151)
@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@
Estimated Disk space required: &pppoe-buildsize;
-The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client, and a
-userspace server componenet that runs works with the client. The
-client allows you to connect to large networks that use the PPPoE protocol,
-common among ADSL providers. The server component runs along side the
-client, allowing you configure other clients that send out a configuration
+The Roaring Penguin PPPoE package contains both a client and a
+server componenet that works with the client. The client allows you
+to connect to large networks that use the PPPoE protocol, common among
+ADSL providers. The server component runs along side the client,
+allowing you to configure other clients that send out a configuration
request.
@@ -19,7 +19,9 @@
In addition, if you plan to use demand dialing, or kernel mode
-PPPoE, you need to patch ppp-2.4.1 and re-install.
-The patch can be downloaded from here:
-
+PPPoE, you need to patch ppp-2.4.1 and re-install using the standard
+BLFS instructions. The patch can be downloaded from here:
+. Additional
+information about kernel mode PPPoE can be found in
+rp-pppoe-3.5/doc/KERNEL-MODE-PPPOE.