Changeset e7f969d


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Timestamp:
10/05/2022 05:45:20 PM (4 months ago)
Author:
David Bryant <davidbryant@…>
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plabs/python-mods, qt5new, trunk
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Spruced up a rather dull chapter, to give it more pizzazz. Use colorful verbs!

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    1616
    1717  <para>
    18     This book is divided into the following parts.
     18    This book is divided into the following fourteen parts.
    1919  </para>
    2020
     
    2222
    2323  <para>
    24     This part contains information which is essential to
    25     the rest of the book.
     24    This part contains essential information which is needed to
     25    understand the rest of the book.
    2626  </para>
    2727
     
    3131  <para>
    3232    Here we introduce basic configuration and security issues.  We also
    33     discuss a range of editors, file systems, and shells which aren't covered
     33    discuss a range of text editors, file systems, and shells which aren't covered
    3434    in the main LFS book.
    3535  </para>
     
    3838
    3939  <para>
    40     In this section we cover libraries which are often needed by the rest
    41     of the book as well as system utilities.  Information on Programming
     40    In this section we cover libraries which are often needed throughout
     41    the book, as well as system utilities.  Information on programming
    4242    (including recompiling <application>GCC</application> to support its full
    4343    range of languages) concludes this part.
     
    4747
    4848  <para>
    49     Here we cover how to connect to a network when you aren't using the
    50     simple static IP setup given in the main LFS book. Networking libraries
     49    Here we explain how to connect to a network when you aren't using the
     50    simple static IP setup presented in the main LFS book. Networking libraries
    5151    and command-line networking tools are also covered here.
    5252  </para>
     
    5555
    5656  <para>
    57     Here we deal with setting up mail and other servers (such as
     57    Here we show you how to set up mail and other servers (such as
    5858    <application>FTP</application>, <application>Apache</application>, etc.).
    5959  </para>
     
    6363  <para>
    6464    This part explains how to set up a basic <application>X Window
    65     System</application> installation along with some generic
     65    System</application>, along with some generic
    6666    <application>X</application> libraries and Window managers.
    6767  </para>
     
    7070
    7171  <para>
    72     For those who want to use the <application>K Desktop
    73     Environment</application> or some parts of it, this part covers it.
     72    This part is for those who want to use the <application>K Desktop
     73    Environment</application>, or parts of it.
    7474  </para>
    7575
     
    9595  </para>
    9696
    97   <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XI - X Software</bridgehead>
     97  <bridgehead renderas="sect2">Part XI - More X Software</bridgehead>
    9898
    9999  <para>
    100100    Office programs and graphical web browsers are important to most people.
    101     They, along with some generic <application>X</application> software can be
     101    They, and some generic <application>X</application> software, can be
    102102    found in this part of the book.
    103103  </para>
     
    106106
    107107  <para>
    108     Here we cover setting multimedia libraries and drivers along with some
    109     audio, video and CD-writing programs.
     108    Here we cover multimedia libraries and drivers, along with some
     109    audio, video, and CD-writing programs.
    110110  </para>
    111111
     
    114114
    115115  <para>
    116     The PST part of the book covers document handling with applications like
    117     <application>Ghostscript</application>, <application>CUPS</application> and
    118     <application>DocBook</application> to installing
     116    This part covers document handling, from applications like
     117    <application>Ghostscript</application>, <application>CUPS</application>, and
     118    <application>DocBook</application>, all the way to
    119119    <application>texlive</application>.
    120120  </para>
     
    123123
    124124  <para>
    125     The Appendices cover information which doesn't belong in the main
    126     book; they are mainly there as a reference.
     125    The Appendices present information which doesn't belong in the body of
     126    book; they are included as reference material. The glossary of acronyms
     127    is a handy feature.
    127128  </para>
    128129
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