Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrdao/cdrdao.ent	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <!ENTITY cdrdao-desc SYSTEM "cdrdao-desc.xml">
 <!ENTITY cdrdao-version "1.1.8">
-<!ENTITY cdrdao-download-http "http://umn.dl.sourceforge.net/sourceforge/cdrdao/cdrdao-&cdrdao-version;.tar.gz">
+<!ENTITY cdrdao-download-http "http://prdownloads.sourceforge.net/cdrdao/cdrdao-&cdrdao-version;.tar.gz">
 <!ENTITY cdrdao-download-ftp " ">
 <!ENTITY cdrdao-size "1.5 MB">
Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdrtools/cdrtools-exp.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
 
 <para><parameter>DEFINSUSR=root DEFINSGRP=root</parameter>: These
-commands install all programs with root.root ownership instead of the default
+commands install all programs with root:root ownership instead of the default
 bin:bin.</para>
 
Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/cdwriteutils.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -5,6 +5,6 @@
 <para>This chapter contains information on <acronym>CD</acronym>-writing in 
 Linux.  You will first have to configure your kernel for
-<acronym>CD</acronym>-writing.  We start by
-discussing how to do this, then discuss installing the actual utilities.</para>
+<acronym>CD</acronym>-writing, which is discussed first.  After that,
+installing the acutal utilities is presented.</para>
 
 <para>Additional sources of information on <acronym>CD</acronym>-writing include:</para>
@@ -19,7 +19,4 @@
 FAQ</ulink></para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para><ulink
-url="http://www.mandrakeuser.org/docs/utils/uiso.html">Handling CD-Images</ulink></para></listitem>
-
 </itemizedlist>
 
Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -25,5 +25,5 @@
 <acronym>CD</acronym>-RW
 drives, including formatting new disks, setting the read and write
-speeds etc.. </para>
+speeds, etc. </para>
 <para>Example:
 <screen><command>cdrwtool -d /dev/scd0 -q</command></screen>
Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-intro.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 <para>The <application><acronym>UDF</acronym>tools</application> package contains utilities
 for creating and mounting <acronym>CD</acronym>-<acronym>RW</acronym> disks with
-<acronym>udf</acronym> file systems for both
+<acronym>UDF</acronym> file systems for both
 reading and writing. <acronym>UDF</acronym> files systems are used on
 both <acronym>CD</acronym>-<acronym>RW</acronym> media and
Index: multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/cdwriteutils/udftools/udftools-kernel-inst.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -3,5 +3,6 @@
 
 <warning>
-<para>Note that this patch can permenantly damage your CD drive if it is
+<para>Note that this patch can permanently damage your
+<acronym>CD</acronym> drive if it is
 from one of the few mentioned at
 <ulink url="http://slashdot.org/article.pl?sid=03/10/25/1737244"/>. Do
@@ -23,5 +24,5 @@
      UDF write support (DANGEROUS)       Y</screen>
 
-<para>If necessary, recompile the kernel with</para>
+<para>If necessary, recompile the kernel with:</para>
 <screen><userinput><command>make CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc dep &amp;&amp;
 make CC=/opt/gcc-2.95.3/bin/gcc bzImage &amp;&amp;
@@ -32,9 +33,9 @@
 <filename>/usr/src/linux/System.map</filename> to
 <filename class="directory">/boot</filename>. If you utilize
-<application>LILO</application> edit <filename>/etc/lilo.conf</filename>
+<application>LILO</application>, edit <filename>/etc/lilo.conf</filename>
 appropriately and run <command>lilo</command>.
 </para>
 
-<para>If you build packet writer as a module, add the following to
+<para>If you built packet writer as a module, add the following to
 <filename>/etc/modules.conf</filename>:</para>
 <screen><userinput>alias block-major-97 pktcdvd</userinput></screen>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/avifile/avifile-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -49,5 +49,5 @@
 <sect3><title>kv4lsetup</title>
 <para><command>kv4lsetup</command> is a small tool which tells video4linux 
-about the current video mode</para></sect3>
+about the current video mode.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>avicat</title>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-config.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -21,5 +21,5 @@
 </para>
 
-<para>Set the proper permissions for <acronym>CODEC</acronym>s, skins and fonts:</para>
+<para>Set the proper ownership for <acronym>CODEC</acronym>s, skins and fonts:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>chown -R root:root <replaceable>[CODECs location]</replaceable> &amp;&amp;
Index: multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -22,6 +22,6 @@
 mplayer http://www.students.uni-marburg.de/~Klossa/hapkidofight_lo.mpg</command></screen>
 
-<para>For further information, have a look at the very good
-documentation included in the package in the subdirectory <filename
+<para>For further information, look at the very good
+documentation included with the package in the source tree subdirectory <filename
 class="directory">DOCS/</filename>.
 </para></sect3>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-inst.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -27,5 +27,5 @@
 <para>The <acronym>GUI</acronym> version of
 <application>MPlayer</application> requires a skin. Extract the default
-one at recommended location:</para>
+one to the recommended location:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput><command>install -d /usr/share/mplayer/Skin &amp;&amp;
@@ -42,5 +42,5 @@
 
 <para>Replace <replaceable>[dvd drive]</replaceable> with whatever
-device is appropriate, for example <filename>/dev/hdc</filename>. if
+device is appropriate, for example <filename>/dev/hdc</filename>. If
 you don't know which device to choose, type:</para>
 
@@ -54,5 +54,5 @@
 <para>If you have SCSI-Emulation activated for the drives, you'll need
 to get the right SCSI-device. Every CD/DVD-ROM drive is mapped in the
-same order as in <acronym>IDE</acronym> to the devices named
+same order as in <acronym>IDE</acronym> devices to the devices named
 <filename>/dev/scd0</filename>,
 <filename>/dev/scd1</filename> and so on.</para>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/mplayer/mplayer-intro.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -3,6 +3,7 @@
 
 <para>The <application>MPlayer</application> package contains an audio/video player that is able to
-play almost every audio and video <acronym>CODEC</acronym> and can be controlled by command
-line or <acronym>GUI</acronym>.</para>
+play almost every audio and video <acronym>CODEC</acronym> and can be
+controlled via the command
+line or a <acronym>GUI</acronym>.</para>
 
 <sect3><title>Package information</title>
@@ -26,5 +27,5 @@
 </itemizedlist>
 
-<note><para>These are not required to build and use MPlayer. You can
+<note><para>The additional downloads are not required to build and use MPlayer. You can
 find many more <acronym>CODEC</acronym>s, skins and fonts at <ulink
 url="http://www.mplayerhq.hu/">MPlayer's homepage</ulink>.</para></note>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -33,6 +33,6 @@
 <para><command>transcode</command> is the encoder's user interface that handles
 the plugins and other programs, being the glue between the modules.
-There are several well documented usage examples on either the homepage
-or the documentation included in the package.</para></sect3>
+There are several well documented usage examples on both the homepage
+and the documentation included in the package.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>tccat</title>
@@ -87,5 +87,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>avidump</title>
-<para><command>avidump</command> dumps audio or video stream of an given 
+<para><command>avidump</command> dumps audio or video stream of a given 
 <acronym>AVI</acronym> file to stdout (for <acronym>AVI</acronym>
 conversion or extraction of audio streams).</para></sect3>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/transcode/transcode-exp.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -2,5 +2,6 @@
 <title>Command explanations</title>
 
-<para><parameter>--without-x</parameter>: Omit this switch if you have X
+<para><parameter>--without-x</parameter>: Omit this switch if you have
+an <application>X</application>
 Window System installed and you want to compile X11 dependent filter
 plugins.</para>
Index: multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml
===================================================================
--- multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ multimedia/videoutils/videoutils.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -5,6 +5,6 @@
 <para>This chapter always seems to be the favorite chapter.  It's 
 probably because there is a lot of satisfaction in playing your first
-video when you have spent so much time getting to that point. All the
-libraries, all the configurations and your reward is that you get to
+video when you have spent so much time getting to that point. All those
+libraries, all the configurations and your reward is that you finally get to
 watch a movie. Not to worry though, there is always one more
 <acronym>CODEC</acronym> to install.</para>
Index: pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/printing/cups/cups-config.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -9,5 +9,5 @@
 Administrators Manual and Software Users Manual are particularly useful.</para>
 
-<para>For non-PostScript printers to print with CUPS you need to install
+<para>For non-PostScript printers to print with CUPS, you need to install
 <xref linkend="espgs"/> to convert PostScript to raster images
 and a driver (e.g., from <xref linkend="gimp-print"/>) to convert
Index: pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/printing/cups/cups-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -41,5 +41,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>reject</title>
-<para><command>reject</command> reject instructs the printing system to
+<para><command>reject</command> instructs the printing system to
 reject print jobs to the specified destinations.
 </para></sect3>
Index: pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/printing/gimp-print/gimp-print-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -7,5 +7,5 @@
 <application><acronym>CUPS</acronym></application> that converts
 the output of <command>pstoraster</command> to a form
-understandable by printer,
+understandable by printers,
 and a plugin that allows printing images from
 <application><acronym>GIMP</acronym>-1.2.5</application>.</para>
Index: pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/printing/lprng/lprng-config.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
 printers. A sample printcap is loaded into the <filename
 class="directory">etc</filename>
-directory which can be some help.  Information is also available at
+directory which can be of some help.  Information is also available at
 <ulink url="http://www.lprng.org"/> and <ulink
 url="http://www.linuxprinting.org"/>.</para> 
 
 <para>The init script installed by <application>LPRng</application> is not 
-consistent with other <acronym>BLFS</acronym> scripts; therefore, we will install
-<filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/lprng</filename>
+consistent with other <acronym>BLFS</acronym> scripts; therefore, install
+the <filename>/etc/rc.d/init.d/lprng</filename>
 init script included in the <xref linkend="intro-important-bootscripts"/> package.</para>
 
Index: pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/scanning/sane/sane-exp.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -1,8 +1,4 @@
 <sect2>
 <title>Installation command explanations</title>
-
-<para><parameter>--prefix=/usr</parameter>: This switch installs all
-software in directories relative to 
-<filename class="directory">/usr</filename>.</para>
 
 <para><parameter>--sysconfdir=/etc</parameter>: This switch installs the
Index: pst/scanning/scanning.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/scanning/scanning.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/scanning/scanning.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 <title>Scanning</title>
 
-<para>This chapter contains scanning applications which allow us to
+<para>This chapter contains scanning applications which allow you to
 convert printed documents into formatted documents readable by other
 applications.</para>
Index: pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/sgml/openjade/openjade-exp.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -9,5 +9,5 @@
 
 <para><parameter>--enable-default-catalog=/etc/sgml/catalog</parameter>: This 
-switch sets the path to our centralized catalog.</para>
+switch sets the path to the centralized catalog.</para>
 
 <para><option>--enable-default-search-path</option>: This switch
Index: pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-desc.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -13,5 +13,5 @@
 
 <sect3><title>onsgmls</title>
-<para><command>onsgmls</command> process <acronym>SGML</acronym> files.</para></sect3>
+<para><command>onsgmls</command> processes <acronym>SGML</acronym> files.</para></sect3>
 
 <sect3><title>ospam</title>
Index: pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-exp.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -9,5 +9,5 @@
 
 <para><parameter>--enable-default-catalog=/etc/sgml/catalog</parameter>: This 
-switch sets the path to our centralized catalog.</para>
+switch sets the path to the centralized catalog.</para>
 
 <para><option>--enable-default-search-path</option>: This switch
Index: pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/sgml/opensp/opensp-intro.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -3,5 +3,5 @@
 
 <para>The <application>OpenSP</application> package contains a
-<application>C++</application> Library for using
+<application>C++</application> library for using
 <acronym>SGML</acronym>/<acronym>XML</acronym> files.
 This is useful for validating, parsing and manipulating
Index: pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml
===================================================================
--- pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml	(revision a3b2641a8bc04c1d496bcf997f61b68f5c549d86)
+++ pst/sgml/sgml-common/sgml-common-inst.xml	(revision eac1ee98ac9f8c851a4b4b40853a01434b36fd75)
@@ -6,5 +6,5 @@
 <screen><userinput><command>patch -Np1 -i ../sgml-common-0.6.3-manpage-1.patch</command></userinput></screen>
 
-<para>The autotools files included along with sgml-common are old. Use the following
+<para>The autotools files included with sgml-common are old. Use the following
 commands to regenerate the files.</para>
 
