Changeset ec64d28 for gnome/core/gnome-session.xml

Timestamp:

12/19/2012 07:57:20 PM (11 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

b3aacc0

Parents:

4abd884

Message:

Minor text fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10894 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

File:

• gnome/core/gnome-session.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

gnome/core/gnome-session.xml

@@ -139 +139 @@
 
       <para>
-        If you are not using <application>gdm</application> to start your
+        If you are not using <application>GDM</application> to start your
         <application>GNOME</application> desktop, you will need to invoke
         <command>gnome-session</command> <emphasis>instead of</emphasis> invoking
@@ -153 +153 @@
         daemons and either <application>Metacity</application> or
         <application>gnome-shell</application>. A desktop manager such as
-        <application>gdm</application> will invoke <application>ConsoleKit</application>
+        <application>GDM</application> will invoke <application>ConsoleKit</application>
         before the window manager, but if you use <command>startx</command> the first
         invocation after booting may fail because the daemon is not already running,
-        so we will invoke it first.
+        so it is invoked first.
       </para>
 
@@ -164 +164 @@
         backup your current <filename>~/.xinitrc</filename> before proceeding.
         Note that you will be able to invoke <application>GNOME Terminal</application>
-        from the menu, so there is no reason to invoke xterm here. Create a new
-        <filename>.xinitrc</filename> using this command:
+        from the menu, so there is no reason to invoke <command>xterm</command> here.
+        Create a new <filename>.xinitrc</filename> using this command:
       </para>