Changeset ec64d28 for introduction/important

Timestamp:

12/19/2012 07:57:20 PM (11 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

b3aacc0

Parents:

4abd884

Message:

Minor text fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10894 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

introduction/important

Files:

• building-notes.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• libraries.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• locale-issues.xml (modified) (1 diff)

introduction/important/building-notes.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
 
   <para>Those people who have built an LFS system may be aware
-  of the general principles of downloading and unpacking software.  We will
-  however repeat some of that information here for those new to building
+  of the general principles of downloading and unpacking software. Some
+  of that information is repeated here for those new to building
   their own software.</para>
 
   <para>Each set of installation instructions contains a URL from which you
-  can download the package.  We do however keep a selection of patches
-  available via HTTP.  These are referenced as needed in the installation
-  instructions.</para>
+  can download the package.  The patches; however, are stored on the LFS
+  servers and are available via HTTP.  These are referenced as needed in the
+  installation instructions.</para>
 
   <para>While you can keep the source files anywhere you like, we assume that

introduction/important/libraries.xml

@@ -29 +29 @@
     systems they are the only type available.</para>
 
-    <para>On almost all Linux platforms we also have shared libraries 
+    <para>On almost all Linux platforms there are also shared libraries 
     (libfoo.so) - one copy of the library is loaded into virtual memory, and 
     shared by all the programs which call any of its functions. This is space 

introduction/important/locale-issues.xml

@@ -282 +282 @@
     # Non-UTF-8 manual page is OK
     iconv -f UTF-8 -t UTF-8 "$a" >/dev/null 2>&1 || continue
-    # If we got here, we found UTF-8 manual page, bad.
+    # Found a UTF-8 manual page, bad.
     echo "UTF-8 manual page: $a" >&2
 done