Changeset ec64d28 for introduction/welcome

Timestamp:

12/19/2012 07:57:20 PM (12 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 12.2, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gimp3, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/for-12.3, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/spidermonkey128, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

b3aacc0

Parents:

4abd884

Message:

Minor text fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10894 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

introduction/welcome

Files:

• packages.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• which.xml (modified) (1 diff)

introduction/welcome/packages.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
 
   <para>We would like to ask a favor, however.  Although this is a public
-  resource for you to use, we do not want to abuse it.  We have already had one
+  resource for you to use, please do not abuse it.  We have already had one
   unthinking individual download over 3 GB of data, including multiple copies of
   the same files that are placed at different locations (via symlinks) to make

introduction/welcome/which.xml

@@ -19 +19 @@
   followed in a linear manner. This is because LFS provides instructions
   on how to create a base system which is capable of turning into anything
-  from a web server to a multimedia desktop system. BLFS is where we try
+  from a web server to a multimedia desktop system. BLFS attempts
   to guide you in the process of going from the base system to your intended
   destination. Choice is very much involved.</para>