Changeset ec64d28 for xsoft

Timestamp:

12/19/2012 07:57:20 PM (11 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

b3aacc0

Parents:

4abd884

Message:

Minor text fixes

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@10894 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

xsoft

Files:

• graphweb/firefox.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• office/libreoffice.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• other/rox-filer.xml (modified) (1 diff)

xsoft/graphweb/firefox.xml

@@ -317 +317 @@
 
     <para>
-      <command>ln -sfv ... /usr/bin/firefox</command>: this puts a symbolic link
-      to the <command>firefox</command> executable in your ${PATH}.
-    </para>
-
-    <para>
-      <command>mkdir -p /usr/lib/mozilla/plugins</command>: this checks
+      <command>ln -sfv ... /usr/bin/firefox</command>: This puts a symbolic link
+      to the <command>firefox</command> executable in your <envar>PATH</envar>
+      variable.
+    </para>
+
+    <para>
+      <command>mkdir -p /usr/lib/mozilla/plugins</command>: This checks
       that <filename class="directory">/usr/lib/mozilla/plugins</filename>
       exists.
@@ -328 +329 @@
 
     <para>
-      <command>ln -sv ... /usr/lib/firefox-&firefox-version;</command>: this
+      <command>ln -sv ... /usr/lib/firefox-&firefox-version;</command>: This
       makes a symbolic link to
       <filename class="directory">/usr/lib/mozilla/plugins</filename>. It's not
-      really needed, <application>Firefox</application> checks
+      really needed, as <application>Firefox</application> checks
       <filename class="directory">/usr/lib/mozilla/plugins</filename> by
-      default, we make the symbolic link to keep all the plugins installed in
+      default, but the symbolic link is made to keep all the plugins installed in
       one folder.
     </para>

xsoft/office/libreoffice.xml

@@ -315 +315 @@
       <command>./download</command>: The build process runs the
       <command>download</command> script which downloads some 470 MB of
-      tarballs. We run the download script to get it out of the way at the
-      start so we can make a backup copy of the downloaded files.
+      tarballs. The download script is ran to get it out of the way at the
+      start so a backup copy of the downloaded files are on hand.
     </para>
 

xsoft/other/rox-filer.xml

@@ -210 +210 @@
 
       <para>
-        That works fine for mounting, but to unmount it we need to run the
-        command <command>fusermount -u ${MOUNTPOINT}</command>. You could set
+        That works fine for mounting, but to unmount it the
+        command <command>fusermount -u ${MOUNTPOINT}</command> is ran. You could set
         that as your default umount command in your rox preferences, but you
         would then be unable to unmount any normal mountpoints (that need
-        umount). What we need is a script that will unmount a Fuse mountpoint
+        umount). A script is needed that will unmount a Fuse mountpoint
         with <command>fusermount -u ${MOUNTPOINT}</command> and everything else
         with <command>umount</command>. As the