Changeset f139a18c for introduction/important

Timestamp:

06/02/2016 06:42:44 AM (8 years ago)

Author:

DJ Lucas <dj@…>

Branches:

systemd-13485

Children:

620dc60

Parents:

af8b2d9

Message:

Update to blfs-systemd-units-20160602, match layout for trunk to minimize conflicts.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/branches/systemd@17426 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

introduction/important

Files:

• important.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• systemd-units.xml (moved) (moved from introduction/important/bootscripts-systemd.xml ) (4 diffs)

introduction/important/important.xml

@@ -26 +26 @@
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="position.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="patches.xml"/>
-  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="bootscripts-systemd.xml"/>
+  <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="systemd-units.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="libraries.xml"/>
   <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" href="locale-issues.xml"/>

introduction/important/systemd-units.xml

@@ -6 +6 @@
 ]>
 
-<sect1 id="bootscripts" xreflabel="blfs-systemd-units-&blfs-bootscripts-version;">
+<sect1 id="bootscripts" xreflabel="blfs-systemd-units-&systemd-units-version;" revision="systemd">
   <?dbhtml filename="systemd-units.html"?>
 
@@ -33 +33 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>
-        Download: <ulink url="&blfs-bootscripts-download;"/>
+        Download: <ulink url="&downloads-root;/blfs-systemd-units-&systemd-units-version;.tar.xz"/>
       </para>
     </listitem>
@@ -41 +41 @@
     The BLFS Systemd Units package will be used throughout the BLFS book
     for systemd unit files. Each systemd unit has a separate install target.
-    It is recommended you keep the package source directory around until
+    It is recommended that you keep the package source directory around until
     completion of your BLFS system. When a systemd unit is requested from BLFS
-    Systemd Units, simply change to the directory and as the
+    Systemd Units, simply change to the directory, and as the
     <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, execute the given
     <command>make install-<replaceable>&lt;systemd-unit&gt;</replaceable></command>
-    command. This command installs the systemd unit to its proper location (along
-    with any auxiliary configuration scripts) and also enables it by default.
+    command. This command installs the systemd unit to its proper location
+    (along with any auxiliary configuration scripts) and also enables it by
+    default.
   </para>
 
@@ -53 +54 @@
     <para>
       It is advisable to peruse each systemd unit before installation to
-      ascertain that it satisfies your need.
+      determine whether the installed files meet your needs.
     </para>
   </note>