Changeset f911e63

Timestamp:

06/22/2024 03:39:23 AM (10 days ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

trunk

Children:

af2b317

Parents:

39ea5586

git-author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…> (06/22/2024 03:02:07 AM)

git-committer:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…> (06/22/2024 03:39:23 AM)

Message:

Move or remove some punctuation just before the right bracket

In both British and American English, the punctuation should be appear
within parentheses iff. belongs to the parenthetical text, i.e. the text
is a full sentence.

For examples:

This is different from punctuation vs. quotes. (In American English both
punctuations and commas always go inside quotation marks.)

And:

This is different from punctuation vs. quotes (in American English both
punctuations and commas always go inside quotation marks).

Link: ​https://editorsmanual.com/articles/brackets-british-vs-american/#punctuation

Files:

• general/genutils/graphviz.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• networking/netlibs/curl.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• postlfs/config/devices.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• postlfs/config/firmware.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• pst/typesetting/tl-installer.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• x/installing/TTF-and-OTF-fonts.xml (modified) (1 diff)

general/genutils/graphviz.xml

@@ -144 +144 @@
       considered experimental), and
       &qt5-deps; (for building the <command>gvedit</command>
-      graph editor.)
+      graph editor)
     </para>
 

networking/netlibs/curl.xml

@@ -138 +138 @@
       <xref linkend="stunnel"/> (for the HTTPS and FTPS tests),
       <xref linkend="openssh"/>, and
-      <xref linkend="valgrind"/> (this will slow the tests down and may cause failures.)
+      <xref linkend="valgrind"/> (this will slow the tests down and may cause failures)
     </para>
 

postlfs/config/devices.xml

@@ -181 +181 @@
       (console and null are always needed) because they are covered by the
       <systemitem class="filesystem">tmpfs</systemitem> partition.  Disk
-      usage for devices is negligible (about 20&ndash;30 bytes per entry.)
+      usage for devices is negligible (about 20&ndash;30 bytes per entry).
     </para>
 

postlfs/config/firmware.xml

@@ -165 +165 @@
       known to be problematic and not supported anymore (see the kernel commit
       <ulink url="https://git.kernel.org/pub/scm/linux/kernel/git/torvalds/linux.git/commit/?id=d23d33e">
-        x86/microcode: Taint and warn on late loading</ulink>.)  Indeed, early
+        x86/microcode: Taint and warn on late loading</ulink>).  Indeed, early
       loading is needed to work around one particular erratum in early Intel
       Haswell processors which had TSX enabled.  (See <ulink url=

pst/typesetting/tl-installer.xml

@@ -133 +133 @@
     <para role="recommended">
       <xref linkend="gnupg2"/> (to validate both the initial downloads, and also
-      any updates you might later make using <command>tlmgr</command>.)
+      any updates you might later make using <command>tlmgr</command>)
       <xref linkend="perl-libwww-perl"/> (to use a single connection to the server,
-      which will reduce its load and speed things up.)
+      which will reduce its load and speed things up)
     </para>
 

x/installing/TTF-and-OTF-fonts.xml

@@ -344 +344 @@
       and Times Roman, though for these it can prefer a different font (see
       the examples in the 'Substitutes' PDFs at <ulink
-      url="http://zarniwhoop.uk/files/PDF-substitutes/">zarniwhoop.uk.)</ulink>
+      url="http://zarniwhoop.uk/files/PDF-substitutes/">zarniwhoop.uk</ulink>).
     </para>