Changeset fd27868

Timestamp:

01/21/2011 02:12:30 PM (13 years ago)

Author:

Randy McMurchy <randy@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.1, 11.0, 11.1, 11.2, 11.3, 12.0, 12.1, 7.10, 7.4, 7.5, 7.6, 7.6-blfs, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, basic, bdubbs/svn, elogind, gnome, kde5-13430, kde5-14269, kde5-14686, kea, ken/TL2024, ken/inkscape-core-mods, ken/tuningfonts, krejzi/svn, lazarus, lxqt, nosym, perl-modules, plabs/newcss, plabs/python-mods, python3.11, qt5new, rahul/power-profiles-daemon, renodr/vulkan-addition, systemd-11177, systemd-13485, trunk, upgradedb, xry111/intltool, xry111/llvm18, xry111/soup3, xry111/test-20220226, xry111/xf86-video-removal

Children:

603822fc

Parents:

af822af

Message:

Minor tweaks

git-svn-id: svn://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/BLFS/trunk/BOOK@8828 af4574ff-66df-0310-9fd7-8a98e5e911e0

Location:

general/sysutils

Files:

• cmake.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• libarchive.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

general/sysutils/cmake.xml

@@ -31 +31 @@
 
     <para>The <application>CMake</application> package contains a modern toolset used
-    for generating <filename>Makefiles</filename>. It is a successor of the auto-generated
+    for generating <filename>Makefile</filename>s. It is a successor of the auto-generated
     <command>configure</command> script.</para>
 
@@ -73 +73 @@
     <para role="required">
     <xref linkend="curl"/>, 
-    <xref linkend="libarchive"/> and 
+    <xref linkend="libarchive"/>, and 
     <xref linkend="expat"/>
     </para>
@@ -104 +104 @@
 
     <para><option>--system-libs</option>: This option forces the build system
-    to link against <application>zlib</application>, <application>bzip2</application>, 
-    <application>curl</application> and <application>expat</application> installed 
+    to link against <application>Zlib</application>, <application>Bzip2</application>, 
+    <application>cURL</application> and <application>Expat</application> installed 
     on the system.</para>
 
@@ -114 +114 @@
 
     <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Library</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Libraries</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>ctest, cpack, ccmake and cmake</seg>
-        <seg></seg>
-        <seg>/usr/share/cmake-&cmake-version;, /usr/share/doc/cmake-&cmake-version;</seg>
+        <seg>ctest, cpack, ccmake, and cmake</seg>
+        <seg>None</seg>
+        <seg>/usr/share/cmake-&cmake-version; and
+        /usr/share/doc/cmake-&cmake-version;</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>

general/sysutils/libarchive.xml

@@ -71 +71 @@
     <bridgehead renderas="sect4">Optional</bridgehead>
     <para role="optional">
-    <xref linkend="libxml2"/> or <xref linkend="expat"/>,
+    <xref linkend="libxml2"/> or <xref linkend="expat"/>, and
     <xref linkend="xz-utils"/>
     </para>
@@ -99 +99 @@
 
     <segmentedlist>
-      <segtitle>Installed Program</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Programs</segtitle>
       <segtitle>Installed Library</segtitle>
-      <segtitle>Installed Directory</segtitle>
+      <segtitle>Installed Directories</segtitle>
 
       <seglistitem>
-        <seg>bsdtar, bsdcpio</seg>
+        <seg>bsdtar and bsdcpio</seg>
         <seg>libarchive.{so,a}</seg>
-        <seg></seg>
+        <seg>None</seg>
       </seglistitem>
     </segmentedlist>
@@ -118 +118 @@
         <term><command>bsdtar</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool like the GNU tar.</para>
+          <para>is a tool similar to GNU <command>tar</command>.</para>
           <indexterm zone="libarchive bsdtar">
             <primary sortas="b-bsdtar">bsdtar</primary>
@@ -128 +128 @@
         <term><command>bsdcpio</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool like cpio.</para>
+          <para>is a tool similar to <command>cpio</command>.</para>
           <indexterm zone="libarchive bsdcpio">
             <primary sortas="b-bsdcpio">bsdcpio</primary>