Changeset 04038ad

Timestamp:

03/31/2023 09:03:18 AM (13 months ago)

Author:

Pierre Labastie <pierre.labastie@…>

Branches:

12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

92dbe96

Parents:

d765208

git-author:

Pierre Labastie <pierre.labastie@…> (03/31/2023 09:01:58 AM)

git-committer:

Pierre Labastie <pierre.labastie@…> (03/31/2023 09:03:18 AM)

Message:

Clarify a sentence in "stripping"

Also fix a typo
Report by Rainer Fiebig

File:

• chapter08/stripping.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter08/stripping.xml

@@ -55 +55 @@
   <important>
     <para>
-      If any package of which the version is different from the version
+      If there is any package whose version is different from the version
       specified by the book (either following a security advisory or
       satisfying personal preference), it may be necessary to update the
-      the library file name in <envar>save_usrlib</envar> or
+      library file name in <envar>save_usrlib</envar> or
       <envar>online_usrlib</envar>.
       <emphasis role='bold'>Failing to do so may render the system