Changeset 0785a5e for chapter08/cleanup.xml

Timestamp:

12/20/2022 03:48:03 PM (22 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <david@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

9c753b58

Parents:

a613960

Message:

Remove redundant verbiage; improve English idiom.

File:

• chapter08/cleanup.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter08/cleanup.xml

@@ -11 +11 @@
   <title>Cleaning Up</title>
 
-  <para>Finally, clean up some extra files left around from running tests:</para>
+  <para>Finally, clean up some extra files left over from running tests:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>rm -rf /tmp/*</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>There are also several files installed in the /usr/lib and /usr/libexec
+  <para>There are also several files in the /usr/lib and /usr/libexec
   directories with a file name extension of .la. These are "libtool archive"
-  files. As already said, on a modern Linux system the libtool .la files are
+  files. On a modern Linux system the libtool .la files are
   only useful for libltdl.  No libraries in LFS are expected to be loaded
-  by libltdl, and it's known that some .la files can cause BLFS packages
-  fail to build.  Remove those files now:</para>
+  by libltdl, and it's known that some .la files can break BLFS package
+  builds.  Remove those files now:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput>find /usr/lib /usr/libexec -name \*.la -delete</userinput></screen>