Changeset 091d624d

Timestamp:

11/17/2022 06:08:13 PM (23 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

2760113

Parents:

ebecd08

Message:

Correct capitalization, spelling, grammar, and idiom. Tighten the
prose by removing some circumlocutions.

Location:

chapter08

Files:

• glibc.xml (modified) (8 diffs)
• introduction.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• pkgmgt.xml (modified) (4 diffs)

chapter08/glibc.xml

@@ -44 +44 @@
     <title>Installation of Glibc</title>
 
-    <para>First, fix an issue building Glibc with parallel jobs and make-4.4
+    <para>First, fix an issue building Glibc with parallel jobs and Make-4.4
     or later:</para>
 
@@ -83 +83 @@
         <term><parameter>--disable-werror</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option disables the -Werror option passed to
+          <para>This option disables the -werror option passed to
           GCC.  This is necessary for running the test suite.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -91 +91 @@
         <term><parameter>--enable-kernel=&min-kernel;</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>This option tells the build system that this glibc may
+          <para>This option tells the build system that this Glibc may
           be used with kernels as old as &min-kernel;. This means generating
           workarounds in case a system call introduced in a later version
@@ -218 +218 @@
 <screen><userinput remap="install">make install</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Fix hardcoded path to the executable loader in
+    <para>Fix a hardcoded path to the executable loader in the
     <command>ldd</command> script:</para>
 
@@ -236 +236 @@
 
     <para>Next, install the locales that can make the system respond in a
-    different language.  None of the locales are required, but if some of them
-    are missing, the test suites of future packages would skip important
-    testcases.</para>
+    different language.  None of these locales are required, but if some of them
+    are missing, the test suites of some packages will skip important
+    test cases.</para>
 
     <para>Individual locales can be installed using the
@@ -291 +291 @@
     character set.</para>
 
-    <para>Alternatively, install all locales listed in the
+    <para>Alternatively, install all the locales listed in the
     <filename>glibc-&glibc-version;/localedata/SUPPORTED</filename> file
     (it includes every locale listed above and many more) at once with the
@@ -327 +327 @@
 
   <sect3>
-  <title>Adding nsswitch.conf</title>
+  <title>Adding Nsswitch.conf</title>
 
     <para>The <filename>/etc/nsswitch.conf</filename> file needs to be created
@@ -357 +357 @@
 
     <sect3>
-    <title>Adding time zone data</title>
+    <title>Adding Time Zone Data</title>
 
     <para>Install and set up the time zone data with the following:</para>

chapter08/introduction.xml

@@ -23 +23 @@
   <para>We do not recommend using optimizations.  They can make
   a program run slightly faster, but they may also cause compilation
-  difficulties and problems when running the program.  If a package refuses to
+  difficulties, and problems when running the program.  If a package refuses to
   compile when using optimization, try to compile it without optimization and
   see if that fixes the problem. Even if the package does compile when using
   optimization, there is the risk it may have been compiled incorrectly because
-  of the complex interactions between the code and build tools.  Also note that
+  of the complex interactions between the code and the build tools.  Also note that
   the <option>-march</option> and <option>-mtune</option> options using values
   not specified in the book have not been tested. This may cause problems with
   the toolchain packages (Binutils, GCC and Glibc).  The small potential gains
-  achieved in using compiler optimizations are often outweighed by the risks.
+  achieved by using compiler optimizations are often outweighed by the risks.
   First-time builders of LFS are encouraged to build without custom
-  optimizations. The subsequent system will still run very fast and be stable
+  optimizations. The resulting system will still run very fast, and be stable
   at the same time.</para>
 
@@ -43 +43 @@
   descriptions) that the package installs.</para>
 
-  <note><para>The SBU values and required disk space includes test suite data
+  <note><para>The SBU values and required disk space include test suite data
   for all applicable packages in <xref linkend="chapter-building-system"/>. SBU
   values have been calculated using a single CPU core (-j1) for all
@@ -49 +49 @@
 
   <sect2>
-    <title>About libraries</title>
+    <title>About Libraries</title>
 
     <para>In general, the LFS editors discourage building and installing static
-    libraries.  The original purpose for most static libraries has been made
+    libraries.  Most static libraries have been made
     obsolete in a modern Linux system.  In addition, linking a static library
     into a program can be detrimental.  If an update to the library is needed
-    to remove a security problem, all programs that use the static library will
-    need to be relinked to the new library.  Since the use of static libraries
+    to remove a security problem, every program that uses the static library will
+    need to be relinked with the new library.  Since the use of static libraries
     is not always obvious, the relevant programs (and the procedures needed to
     do the linking) may not even be known.</para>
 
-    <para>In the procedures in this chapter, we remove or disable installation of
+    <para>The procedures in this chapter remove or disable installation of
     most static libraries. Usually this is done by passing a
     <option>--disable-static</option> option to <command>configure</command>.
     In other cases, alternate means are needed. In a few cases, especially
-    glibc and gcc, the use of static libraries remains essential to the general
+    Glibc and GCC, the use of static libraries remains an essential feature of the
     package building process. </para>
 
-    <para>For a more complete discussion of libraries, see the discussion
+    <para>For a more complete discussion of libraries, see
     <ulink url="&blfs-book;introduction/libraries.html">
     Libraries: Static or shared?</ulink> in the BLFS book.</para>

chapter08/pkgmgt.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
   <para>Package Management is an often requested addition to the LFS Book. A
   Package Manager tracks the installation of files, making it easier to
-  remove and upgrade packages. As well as the binary and library files, a
-  package manager will handle the installation of configuration files.  Before
+  remove and upgrade packages. A good package manager will handle the
+  installation of configuration files, and also install the executable files.  Before
   you begin to wonder, NO&mdash;this section will not talk about nor recommend
-  any particular package manager. What it provides is a roundup of the more
+  any particular package manager. What it does provide is a roundup of the more
   popular techniques and how they work. The perfect package manager for you may
   be among these techniques, or it may be a combination of two or more of these
@@ -62 +62 @@
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>If Linux API headers or glibc need to be upgraded to a newer
-        version, (e.g.,  from glibc-2.31 to glibc-2.32), it is safer to
+        <para>If the Linux API headers or Glibc need to be upgraded to a newer
+        version, (e.g.,  from Glibc-2.31 to Glibc-2.32), it is safer to
         rebuild LFS.  Though you <emphasis>may</emphasis> be able to rebuild
         all the packages in their dependency order, we do not recommend
@@ -203 +203 @@
       reality it is installed in the
       <filename class="directory">/usr/pkg</filename> hierarchy. Installing in
-      this manner is not usually a trivial task. For example, consider that you
+      this manner is not usually a trivial task. For example, suppose you
       are installing a package libfoo-1.1. The following instructions may
       not install the package properly:</para>
@@ -322 +322 @@
     another computer with the same architecture as the base system is as
     simple as using <command>tar</command> on the LFS partition that contains
-    the root directory (about 250MB uncompressed for a base LFS build), copying
+    the root directory (about 900MB uncompressed for a basic LFS build), copying
+    <!-- D. Bryant created LFS 11.2 in October 2022; 900MB is (roughly) the size of his rsync archive. -->
     that file via network transfer or CD-ROM / USB stick to the new system, and expanding
     it.  After that, a few configuration files will have to be changed.