Changeset 0d84af1 for chapter06/dbus.xml

Timestamp:

12/28/2017 03:52:38 AM (6 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

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Children:

25332b5

Parents:

9fde3e9

Message:

Typos and wording changes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@11343 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter06/dbus.xml (modified) (10 diffs)

chapter06/dbus.xml

@@ -126 +126 @@
         <term><command>dbus-cleanup-sockets</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is used to clean up leftover sockets in a directory</para>
+          <para>Used to clean up leftover sockets in a directory</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-cleanup-sockets">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-cleanup-sockets">dbus-cleanup-sockets</primary>
@@ -136 +136 @@
         <term><command>dbus-daemon</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is the D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
+          <para>The D-Bus message bus daemon</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-daemon">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-daemon">dbus-daemon</primary>
@@ -146 +146 @@
         <term><command>dbus-launch</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>starts <command>dbus-daemon</command> from a shell
+          <para>Starts <command>dbus-daemon</command> from a shell
           script</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-launch">
@@ -157 +157 @@
         <term><command>dbus-monitor</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>monitors messages passing through a D-Bus message bus</para>
+          <para>Monitors messages passing through a D-Bus message bus</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-monitor">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-monitor">dbus-monitor</primary>
@@ -167 +167 @@
         <term><command>dbus-run-session</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>starts a session bus instance of <command>dbus-daemon</command>
+          <para>Starts a session bus instance of <command>dbus-daemon</command>
           from a shell script and starts a specified program in that
           session</para>
@@ -179 +179 @@
         <term><command>dbus-send</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>sends a message to a D-Bus message bus</para>
+          <para>Sends a message to a D-Bus message bus</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-send">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-send">dbus-send</primary>
@@ -189 +189 @@
         <term><command>dbus-test-tool</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>is a tool to help packages test
-          <application>D-Bus</application>.</para>
+          <para>A tool to help packages test
+          <application>D-Bus</application></para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-test-tool">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-test-tool">dbus-test-tool</primary>
@@ -201 +201 @@
         <term><command>dbus-update-activation-environment</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>updates environment variables that will be set for
-          <application>D-Bus</application> session services.</para>
+          <para>Updates environment variables that will be set for
+          <application>D-Bus</application> session services</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-update-activation-environment">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-update-activation-environment">dbus-update-activation-environment</primary>
@@ -212 +212 @@
         <term><command>dbus-uuidgen</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>generates a universally unique ID</para>
+          <para>Generates a universally unique ID</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus dbus-uuidgen">
             <primary sortas="b-dbus-uuidgen">dbus-uuidgen</primary>
@@ -222 +222 @@
         <term><filename class="libraryfile">libdbus-1</filename></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>contains API functions used to communicate with the D-Bus
+          <para>Contains API functions used to communicate with the D-Bus
           message bus</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-dbus libdbus-1">