Changeset 0ea3431 for chapter03/introduction.xml

Timestamp:

09/26/2022 02:03:23 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

259794e

Parents:

1f6dfd4 (diff), f427ba23 (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

File:

• chapter03/introduction.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter03/introduction.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
   order to build a basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to
   versions of the software that are known to work, and this book is based on
-  their use. We highly recommend against using different versions because the build
+  their use. We highly recommend against using different versions, because the build
   commands for one version may not work with a different version, unless the
-  different version is specified by a LFS errata or security advisory.
+  different version is specified by an LFS erratum or security advisory.
   The newest package versions may also have problems that require
   work-arounds. These work-arounds will be developed and stabilized in the
@@ -22 +22 @@
 
   <para>For some packages, the release tarball and the (Git or SVN)
-  repository snapshot tarball for this release may be published with
-  similar file name.  A release tarball contains generated files (for
-  example, <command>configure</command> script generated by
+  repository snapshot tarball for that release may be published with
+  similar file names.  A release tarball contains generated files (for
+  example, a <command>configure</command> script generated by
   <command>autoconf</command>), in addition to the contents of the
   corresponding repository snapshot.  The book uses release tarballs
@@ -70 +70 @@
     <listitem>
       <para>For stable versions of the book, a tarball of all the needed files
-      can be downloaded from one of the LFS files mirrors listed at
+      can be downloaded from one of the mirror sites listed at
       <ulink url="https://www.linuxfromscratch.org/mirrors.html#files"/>.</para>
     </listitem>