Changeset 0ea3431 for chapter03/packages.xml

Timestamp:

09/26/2022 02:03:23 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

259794e

Parents:

1f6dfd4 (diff), f427ba23 (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

File:

• chapter03/packages.xml (modified) (3 diffs)

chapter03/packages.xml

@@ -16 +16 @@
     package should be used to avoid security vulnerabilities.</para>
 
-    <para>The upstreams may remove old releases, especially when these
+    <para>The upstream sources may remove old releases, especially when those
     releases contain a security vulnerability.  If one URL below is not
     reachable, you should read the security advisories first to figure out
@@ -22 +22 @@
     not, try to download the removed package from a mirror.  Although it's
     possible to download an old release from a mirror even if this release
-    has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not recommended to
-    use a release known to be vulnerable for building your system.</para>
+    has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not a good idea to
+    use a release known to be vulnerable when building your system.</para>
   </note>
 
@@ -454 +454 @@
 
         <note>
-          <para>The Linux kernel is updated relatively often, many times due to
+          <para>The Linux kernel is updated quite frequently, many times due to
           discoveries of security vulnerabilities.  The latest available
           <!--&linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;.x--> stable kernel