Changeset 13702d9

Timestamp:

10/28/2022 03:10:10 PM (18 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

4e26453

Parents:

edbf3d9

Message:

Cleaned up English idiom just a trifle.

File:

• chapter04/addinguser.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter04/addinguser.xml

@@ -63 +63 @@
       <term><parameter>lfs</parameter></term>
       <listitem>
-        <para>This is the actual name for the created user.</para>
+        <para>This is the name of the new user.</para>
       </listitem>
     </varlistentry>
@@ -72 +72 @@
   non-&root; user (as opposed to switching to user &lfs-user;
   when logged in as &root;, which does not require the &lfs-user; user to
-  have a password), you need to set a password of &lfs-user;.  Issue the
+  have a password), you need to set a password for &lfs-user;.  Issue the
   following command as the &root; user to set the password:</para>