Changeset 19f8a62

Timestamp:

03/02/2007 11:23:14 PM (17 years ago)

Author:

Jeremy Huntwork <jhuntwork@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

09ec1f4

Parents:

40ffa16

Message:

Warnings and important notices about a command that appear after instructions to run it are evil.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7953 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/changelog.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter05/adjusting.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -38 +38 @@
 
     <listitem>
+      <para>2007-03-1</para>
+      <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem>
+          <para>[jhuntwork] - Minor grammatical changes. Move some warnings and
+          notices to appear before affected commands.</para>
+        </listitem>
+      </itemizedlist>
+    </listitem>
+
+    <listitem>
       <para>2007-02-25</para>
       <itemizedlist>

chapter05/adjusting.xml

@@ -33 +33 @@
   dumping GCC's <quote>specs</quote> file to a location where GCC will look for it
   by default. A simple <command>sed</command> substitution then alters the
-  dynamic linker that GCC will use:</para>
+  dynamic linker that GCC will use.</para>
 
-<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
-<screen><userinput>gcc -dumpspecs | sed 's@^/lib/ld-linux.so.2@/tools&amp;@g' \
-  > `dirname $(gcc -print-libgcc-file-name)`/specs</userinput></screen>
-
-  <para>It is recommended that the above command be copy-and-pasted in order to
-  ensure accuracy. Be sure to visually inspect the specs file in order to
-  verify that all occurrences of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote> have been
-  replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
+  <para>For the sake of accuracy, it is recommended to use a copy-and-paste
+  method when issuing the following command. Be sure to visually inspect the
+  specs file and verify that all occurrences of <quote>/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>
+  have been replaced with <quote>/tools/lib/ld-linux.so.2</quote>.</para>
 
   <important>
@@ -48 +44 @@
     something other than <filename class="libraryfile">ld-linux.so.2</filename>,
     replace <quote>ld-linux.so.2</quote> with the name of the platform's
-    dynamic linker in the above commands. Refer back to <xref
+    dynamic linker in the following commands. Refer back to <xref
     linkend="ch-tools-toolchaintechnotes" role=","/> if necessary.</para>
   </important>
+
+<!-- Ampersands are needed to allow copy and paste -->
+<screen><userinput>gcc -dumpspecs | sed 's@^/lib/ld-linux.so.2@/tools&amp;@g' \
+  > `dirname $(gcc -print-libgcc-file-name)`/specs</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>During the build process, GCC runs a script