Changeset 1b256332 for chapter01/how.xml

Timestamp:

03/16/2001 05:52:55 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Balu Walter <tw@…>

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• chapter01/how.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para>
 We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux
-distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. You
-don't need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
+distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. There
+is no need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
 system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and
 other tools).
@@ -11 +11 @@
 
 <para>
-If you don't have Linux installed yet, you won't be able to put this
-book to use right away. I suggest you first install a Linux
-distribution. It really doesn't matter which one you install. It also 
+If Linux was not installed yet, it is not possible to put this
+book to use right away. I suggest to first install a Linux
+distribution. It really doesn't matter which one is installed. It also 
 doesn't need to be the latest version, though it shouldn't be too old. 
-If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. You will save 
-yourself a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer. 
+If it is about a year old or newer it should do just fine. It will save 
+a lot of trouble if your normal system uses glibc-2.1 or newer. 
 Libc5 isn't supported by this book, though it isn't impossible to use a 
-libc5 system if you have no choice.
+libc5 system if there is no choice.
 </para>