Changeset 1b737e6

Timestamp:

05/08/2006 09:55:43 PM (17 years ago)

Author:

Ken Moffat <ken@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/parallelism, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008

Children:

9ff39e28

Parents:

ad3a136

Message:

Minor rewording, also removes unnecessary visible whitespace.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@7596 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter02/creatingfilesystem.xml

@@ -15 +15 @@
   system (<systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>), but with newer
   high-capacity hard disks, journaling file systems are becoming increasingly
-  popular. The third extended filesystem (<systemitem class="filesystem">ext3
-  </systemitem>) is a widely-used development of <systemitem class="filesystem">
-  ext2</systemitem> which adds a journal and is compatible with the E2fsprogs
-  utilities. We will create an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
+  popular. The third extended filesystem (<systemitem
+  class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>) is a widely used enhancement to
+  <systemitem class="filesystem">ext2</systemitem>, which adds journalling
+  capabilities and is compatible with the E2fsprogs utilities.
+  We will create an <systemitem class="filesystem">ext3</systemitem>
   file system. Build instructions for other file systems can be found at
   <ulink url="&blfs-root;view/svn/postlfs/filesystems.html"/>.</para>