Changeset 1cb4a25b

Timestamp:

09/23/2022 08:16:02 PM (19 months ago)

Author:

David Bryant <davidbryant@…>

Branches:

11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

2ed0e93

Parents:

81793c6e

Message:

Tweak English idiom in chapter 4.1 (Introduction)

File:

• chapter04/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter04/introduction.xml

@@ -13 +13 @@
   <para>In this chapter, we will perform a few additional tasks to prepare
   for building the temporary system. We will create a set of directories in
-  <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> for the installation of the
-  temporary tools, add an unprivileged user to reduce risk,
+  <filename class="directory">$LFS</filename> (in which we will install the
+  temporary tools), add an unprivileged user,
   and create an appropriate build environment for that user. We will also
-  explain the unit of time we use to measure how long LFS packages take to
-  build, or <quote>SBUs</quote>, and give some information about package
+  explain the units of time (<quote>SBUs</quote>) we use to measure how
+  long it takes to build LFS packages, and provide some information about package
   test suites.</para>