Changeset 1cdaff9 for chapter06

Timestamp:

03/12/2009 09:09:00 PM (15 years ago)

Author:

Matthew Burgess <matthew@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

6a4a95f

Parents:

4d86da9

Message:

Various text updates/typo fixes from Chris Staub. Fixes #2367.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@8839 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter06

Files:

• db.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gcc.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• grep.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• inetutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter06/db.xml

@@ -97 +97 @@
 
     <para>It is not possible to test the package meaningfully, because
-    that would involve building TCL bindings. TCL bindings cannot be
-    built properly now because TCL is linked against Glibc in
+    that would involve building Tcl bindings. Tcl bindings cannot be
+    built properly now because Tcl is linked against Glibc in
     <filename class="directory">/tools</filename>, not against Glibc in
     <filename class="directory">/usr</filename>.</para>

chapter06/gcc.xml

@@ -62 +62 @@
 
     <para>The <command>fixincludes</command> script is known to occasionally
-    erroneously attempt to &quot;fix&quot; the system headers installed so far. As
-    the headers installed by GCC-&gcc-version; and Glibc-&glibc-version; are known
-    to not require fixing, issue the following command to prevent the
-    <command>fixincludes</command> script from running:</para>
+    erroneously attempt to &quot;fix&quot; the system headers installed so far.
+    As the headers up to this point are known to not require fixing,
+    issue the following command to prevent the <command>fixincludes</command>
+    script from running:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i 's@\./fixinc\.sh@-c true@' gcc/Makefile.in</userinput></screen>
@@ -83 +83 @@
     --disable-multilib --disable-bootstrap</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequsites that
-    are not available.  See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to
+    <para>Note that for other languages, there are some prerequisites that
+    are not available. See the BLFS Book for instructions on how to
     build all the GCC supported languages.</para>
 

chapter06/grep.xml

@@ -60 +60 @@
         <term><parameter>--without-included-regex</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>The configure check for glibc's regex library is broken when
-          building against glibc-2.8.  This switch forces the use of glibc's
-          regex library.</para>
+          <para>The configure check for Glibc's regex library is broken when
+          building against Glibc-&glibc-version;.  This switch forces the use
+          of Glibc's regex library.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>

chapter06/inetutils.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
     <title>Installation of Inetutils</title>
 
-    <para>All programs that come with Inetutils will not be installed.
+    <para>Not all programs that come with Inetutils will be installed.
     However, the Inetutils build system will insist on installing all the
     man pages anyway. The following patch will correct this