Changeset 1f99d82

Timestamp:

02/01/2024 07:42:42 PM (8 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/update-glibc

Children:

6f6f2e6

Parents:

024bcce

Message:

glibc: Reword in the upgradation instruction suggested by renodr

File:

• chapter08/glibc.xml (modified) (5 diffs)

chapter08/glibc.xml

@@ -206 +206 @@
         If upgrading Glibc to a new minor version (for example, from
         Glibc-2.36 to Glibc-&glibc-version;) on a running LFS system, you
-        need to take some extra caution to avoid breaking the system:
+        need to take some extra precautions to avoid breaking the system:
       </para>
 
@@ -255 +255 @@
 
           <para>
-            If such a LFS system is based on Systemd, disable and stop
-            the <command>nscd</command> service now:
+            If this system (prior to LFS 12.1, exclusive) is based on
+            Systemd, it's also needed to disable and stop the
+            <command>nscd</command> service now:
           </para>
 
@@ -266 +267 @@
             Upgrade the kernel and reboot if it's older than &min-kernel;
             (check the current version with <command>uname -r</command>)
-            or you want to upgrade it anyway, following
+            or if you want to upgrade it anyway, following
             following <xref linkend='ch-bootable-kernel' role='.'/>
           </para>
@@ -276 +277 @@
             (check the current version with
             <command>cat /usr/include/linux/version.h</command>)
-            or you want to upgrade it anyway, following
+            or if you want to upgrade it anyway, following
             <xref linkend='ch-tools-linux-headers'/> (but removing
             <envar>$LFS</envar> from the <command>cp</command> command).
@@ -304 +305 @@
         It's imperative to strictly follow these steps above unless you
         completely understand what you are doing.
-        <emphasis role='bold'>Any unproved deviation may render the system
-        completely unusable.  YOU ARE WARNED.</emphasis>
+        <emphasis role='bold'>Any unexpected deviation may render the
+        system completely unusable.  YOU ARE WARNED.</emphasis>
       </para>