Changeset 280bcc8

Timestamp:

04/12/2001 11:25:34 PM (23 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

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Children:

cc107b1

Parents:

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Message:

Update

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@472 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/how.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter01/introduction.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• chapter02/aboutlfs.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• preface/whonotread.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -4 +4 @@
 <para>
 We are going to build the LFS system by using an already installed Linux
-distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. There
+distribution such as Debian, SuSe, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc. There
 is no need to have any kind of bootdisk. We will use an existing Linux
 system as the base (since we need a compiler, linker, text editor, and
-others tools).
+other tools).
 </para>
 

chapter01/introduction.xml

@@ -7 +7 @@
 arranged, I didn't like the way certain programs were configured by
 default, and more of those things. I came to realize that if I wanted to
-be fully satisfied with a Linux system, I would have to build my own Linux
-system from scratch, ideally using only the source code. Not using 
+be fully satisfied with a Linux system, I would have to build my own system 
+from scratch, ideally using only the source code. Not using 
 pre-compiled packages of any kind. No help from some sort of CD-ROM or 
 bootdisk that would install some basic utilities. I would use my current 
@@ -15 +15 @@
 
 <para>
-This, at one time, wild idea seemed very difficult and, at times, almost
+This, at one time, wild idea seemed very difficult and at times almost
 impossible. After sorting out all kinds of dependency problems, compile
 problems, etcetera, a custom-built Linux system was created and fully 

chapter02/aboutlfs.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
 
 <para>
-Now, if you read to run a command like <userinput>./configure
+Now, if you are told to run a command like <userinput>./configure
 --prefix=$LFS</userinput> you can type that literally. Your shell will
 replace $LFS with /mnt/lfs when it processes the command line (meaning
@@ -38 +38 @@
 <para>
 If you plan to use $LFS, do not forget to set the $LFS variable at all 
-times. If the variable is not set and is used it in a command, $LFS will 
+times. If the variable is not set and is used in a command, $LFS will 
 be ignored and whatever is left will be executed. A command like
 <userinput>echo "root:x:0:0:root:/root:/bin/bash" &gt; 

preface/whonotread.xml

@@ -18 +18 @@
 going to build myself and, along the way, learn what every component of 
 a system is for, or is just the learning part my main objective?" If
-you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just want to learn, 
-then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
+you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just want to learn
+the basics, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
 </para>