Index: chapter08/iproute2.xml
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--- chapter08/iproute2.xml	(revision 859502b2f4443ed71e6e727058db255985b6ff38)
+++ chapter08/iproute2.xml	(revision 28a0e48811abab34e0290b96f745bce19b59ac31)
@@ -43,10 +43,10 @@
 
     <para>The <command>arpd</command> program included in this package will not
-    be built since it is dependent on Berkeley DB, which is not installed in
-    LFS. However, a directory for <command>arpd</command> and a man page will still
-    be installed. Prevent this by running the commands below.
-    If the <command>arpd</command> binary is needed,
-    instructions for compiling Berkeley DB can be found in the BLFS Book at
-    <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/db.html"/>.
+    be built since it depends on Berkeley DB, which is not installed in
+    LFS. However, a directory and a man page for <command>arpd</command> will still
+    be installed. Prevent this by running the commands shown below.
+    (If the <command>arpd</command> program is needed,
+    instructions for compiling Berkeley DB can be found in the BLFS book at
+    <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/db.html"/>.)
     </para>
 
@@ -130,5 +130,5 @@
         <term><command>genl</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Generic netlink utility frontend</para>
+          <para>Generic netlink utility front end</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 genl">
             <primary sortas="b-genl">genl</primary>
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>A shell script wrapper for the <command>ip</command> command
-          [Note that it requires the <command>arping</command> and
+          (Note that this script requires the <command>arping</command> and
           <command>rdisk</command> programs from the
-          iputils package found at <ulink url="http://www.skbuff.net/iputils/"/>.]</para>
+          iputils package found at <ulink url="http://www.skbuff.net/iputils/"/>.)</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ifcfg">
             <primary sortas="b-ifcfg">ifcfg</primary>
@@ -153,6 +153,6 @@
         <term><command>ifstat</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Shows the interface statistics, including the amount of
-          transmitted and received packets by interface</para>
+          <para>Shows interface statistics, including the number of
+          packets transmitted and received, by interface</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ifstat">
             <primary sortas="b-ifstat">ifstat</primary>
@@ -164,5 +164,5 @@
         <term><command>ip</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>The main executable. It has several different functions:</para>
+          <para>The main executable. It has several different functions, including these:</para>
 
           <para><command>ip link <replaceable>&lt;device&gt;</replaceable></command>
@@ -214,5 +214,5 @@
         <term><command>nstat</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Shows network statistics</para>
+          <para>Displays network statistics</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 nstat">
             <primary sortas="b-nstat">nstat</primary>
@@ -224,5 +224,5 @@
         <term><command>routef</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>. This is for flushing
+          <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>, for flushing
           the routing tables</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 routef">
@@ -235,5 +235,5 @@
         <term><command>routel</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>. This is for listing
+          <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>, for listing
           the routing tables</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 routel">
@@ -267,5 +267,5 @@
         <term><command>rtpr</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Converts the output of <command>ip -o</command> back into a
+          <para>Converts the output of <command>ip -o</command> into a
           readable form</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 rtpr">
@@ -296,23 +296,24 @@
       </varlistentry>
 
+      <!-- FixMe These options don't match tc -help screen -->
       <varlistentry id="tc">
         <term><command>tc</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Traffic Controlling Executable; this is for Quality Of Service
-          (QOS) and Class Of Service (COS) implementations</para>
-
-          <para><command>tc qdisc</command> allows users to setup the queueing
+          <para>Traffic control for Quality of Service
+          (QoS) and Class of Service (CoS) implementations</para>
+
+          <para><command>tc qdisc</command> allows users to set up the queueing
           discipline</para>
 
-          <para><command>tc class</command> allows users to setup classes based
+          <para><command>tc class</command> allows users to set up classes based
           on the queuing discipline scheduling</para>
 
           <para><command>tc estimator</command> allows users to estimate the
-          network flow into a network</para>
-
-          <para><command>tc filter</command> allows users to setup the QOS/COS
+          data flow through a network</para>
+
+          <para><command>tc filter</command> allows users to set up the QoS/CoS
           packet filtering</para>
 
-          <para><command>tc policy</command> allows users to setup the QOS/COS
+          <para><command>tc policy</command> allows users to set up the QoS/CoS
           policies</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ss">
