Changeset 2ab760c


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Timestamp:
08/28/2003 09:19:35 PM (21 years ago)
Author:
Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc
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Parents:
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Message:

Fixing some typos, adding a little markup, and other random retouches.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2691 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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  • appendixa/autoconf-shortdesc.xml

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    22
    33<para>Last checked against version &autoconf-contversion;.</para>
    4 <para>
    5   Autoconf produces shell scripts which automatically configure source
    6   code.</para>
     4<para>Autoconf produces shell scripts which automatically configure source
     5code.</para>
    76
    87<para>Autoconf installs the following:</para>

  • chapter01/changelog.xml

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    207207
    208208<listitem><para>May 21st, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 - Installing Expect:
    209 Don't both passing anything more than --prefix=/stage1. None of it is
     209Don't bother passing anything more than --prefix=/stage1. None of it is
    210210needed.</para></listitem>
    211211
    … …  
    226226Changed the single quotes to double quotes in the echo command. Without it,
    227227$(hostname) won't expand which defeats the sole purpose of this command -
    228 to make perl's hostname check work.</para></listitem>
     228to make Perl's hostname check work.</para></listitem>
    229229
    230230<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Removed all occurrences &amp;&amp;.
    … …  
    2322326.</para></listitem>
    233233
    234 <listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Applied "Changing ownership"
    235 patch to polish the text. Closes bug #511.</para></listitem>
    236 
    237 <listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Applied "Configuring system
    238 components" patch to polish the text. Closes bug #510.</para></listitem>
     234<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06: Applied "Changing
     235ownership" patch to polish the text. Closes bug #511.</para></listitem>
     236
     237<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06: Applied "Configuring
     238system components" patch to polish the text. Closes bug #510.</para></listitem>
    239239
    240240<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06: Removed TCL, Expect
    … …  
    243243
    244244<listitem><para>May 13th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 06 - Installing Shadow:
    245 touch the /usr/bin/passwd file before installation. Not doing so results in
     245Touching the /usr/bin/passwd file before installation. Not doing so results in
    246246Shadow thinking passwd will be in /bin/passwd.</para></listitem>
    247247
    … …  
    281281
    282282<listitem><para>May 12th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 - Installing Perl:
    283 Add extra commands to build certain modules into Perl. This is to
    284 accomadate the Coreutils "make check". Partially fixes bug #528.</para></listitem>
     283Added extra commands to build certain modules into Perl. This is to accomodate
     284the Coreutils "make check". Partially fixes bug #528.</para></listitem>
    285285
    286286<listitem><para>May 12th, 2003 [winkie]: Chapter 05 - Installing Gzip:
    … …  
    297297
    298298<listitem><para>May 11th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - GCC-2.95.3: Added
    299 --enable-threads=posix as well to complete the C++
    300 addition.</para></listitem>
     299--enable-threads=posix as well to complete the C++ addition.</para></listitem>
    301300
    302301<listitem><para>May 11th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - GCC-2.95.3: Added
    … …  
    398397(likewise we use tooldir=/usr in chapter 6).</para></listitem>
    399398
    400 <listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chaper 05 - Kernel headers:
     399<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - Kernel headers:
    401400Removed the usage of <userinput>cp -H</userinput> because there are
    402401distributions out there that do not know about the
    … …  
    407406
    408407<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 06 - Adjusting toolchain:
    409 Made it more architecture independant.</para></listitem>
     408Made it more architecture-independent.</para></listitem>
    410409
    411410<listitem><para>May 10th, 2003 [gerard]: Chapter 05 - Locking in Glibc:
    412 Made it more architecture independant.</para></listitem>
     411Made it more architecture-independent.</para></listitem>
    413412
    414413<listitem><para>May 7th, 2003 [gerard]: Removed GCC No Debug patches. No
    … …  
    425424chapter 5 (its inclusion was a mistake).</para></listitem>
    426425
    427 <listitem><para>May 5th, 2003 [gerard]: Various buf fixes that were
     426<listitem><para>May 5th, 2003 [gerard]: Various bug fixes that were
    428427introduced during the pure-lfs integration.</para></listitem>
    429428

  • chapter01/how.xml

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    44
    55<para>We are going to build the LFS system by using a previously installed
    6 Linux distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, RedHat, etc.
    7 We will use the existing Linux system as the development platform, because
    8 we need tools like a compiler, linker, text editor, and other development
     6Linux distribution such as Debian, SuSE, Slackware, Mandrake, or Red Hat.
     7We will use this existing Linux system as a starting platform, because we
     8will need tools like a compiler, linker, text editor, and other development
    99tools to build our system. Ordinarily, the required tools are available by
    1010default if we selected "development" as one of our installation options

  • chapter04/chapter04.xml

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    1010<para>Below is a list of packages you need to download for building a
    1111basic Linux system. The listed version numbers correspond to versions
    12 of the software that are known to work, and this book is based upon
    13 them. Feel free to try out newer versions, but if you experience problems
    14 with those versions, please try the recommended version first before
    15 sending bug reports.</para>
     12of the software that are <emphasis>known</emphasis> to work, and this book is
     13based upon them. You can try out newer versions, of course, but if you
     14experience problems with those versions, use the indicated version instead.
     15Often there is a reason for not using the latest version.</para>
    1616
    1717<para>All the URLs, when possible, refer to the project's page at

  • chapter06/basic-net.xml

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    55<para>Here will be set up basic networking now that all the necessary
    66software has been installed. There isn't all that much to do, really,
    7 just creating a basic /etc/hosts file, and downloading some very
    8 high-quality network information files.</para>
     7just creating a basic <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file, and downloading
     8some high-quality network information files.</para>
    99
    10 <para>The first step is to create /etc/hosts. This file contains
    11 information allowing resolution of hostnames to IP addresses. Create a
    12 very basic one (we'll make a better one later) with the following
     10<para>The first step is to create <filename>/etc/hosts</filename>. This file
     11contains information allowing resolution of host names to IP addresses.
     12Create a very basic one (we'll make a better one later) with the following
    1313command:</para>
    1414
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    1616
    1717<para>Now unpack the Lfs-Utils tarball again, as we're going to copy two
    18 necessary files from it. One is the /etc/services file, which is used to
    19 resolv service numbers to human-readable names, and the /etc/protocols
    20 file, which does the same for protocol numbers. Copy them with the
    21 following command after you have entered the Lfs-Utils directory:</para>
     18necessary files from it. One is <filename>/etc/services</filename>, which is
     19used to resolve service numbers to human-readable names, and the other is
     20<filename>/etc/protocols</filename>, which does the same for protocol numbers.
     21Copy them with the following command after you have entered the Lfs-Utils
     22directory:</para>
    2223
    2324<para><screen><userinput>cp -f etc/{services,protocols} /etc</userinput></screen></para>
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