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10	10	<para>The software used to create an LFS system is constantly being updated and
11		enhanced. Security warnings, and bug fixes may become available after the LFS
	11	enhanced. Security warnings and bug fixes may become available after the LFS
12	12	book has been released. To check whether the package versions or instructions in
13	13	this release of LFS need any modifications to accomodate security

prologue/hostreqs.xml

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 higher. There are two main reasons for this requirement. First, the Native POSIX
 Threading Library (NPTL) test suite will segfault if the host's kernel has not
 been compiled with GCC-3.0 or a later version. Secondly, the 2.6.2 or later
+been compiled with GCC-3.0 or a later version. Second, the 2.6.2 or later
 version of the kernel is required for the use of Udev. Udev creates devices
 dynamically by reading from the <systemitem
 …
 compile a 2.6 kernel yourself. Instructions for compiling the kernel and
 configuring the boot loader (assuming the host uses GRUB) are located in <xref
 linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. This second option can also been seen as a gauge
 of your current Linux skills. If this second requirement is too steep then the
+linkend="chapter-bootable"/>. This second option can also be seen as a gauge
+of your current Linux skills. If this second requirement is too steep, then the
 LFS book will not likely be much use to you at this time.</para>

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 <para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>
 <para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book,
 mainly to emphasize important points or items.</para>
+<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book.  Its main
+purpose is to emphasize important points or items.</para>
 <para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para>
 <para>This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS
 community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations,
+<para>This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS
+community and to external pages.  It includes HOWTOs, download locations,
 and websites.</para>
 …
 <para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed
 as seen<phrase condition="html"> or copy-and-pasted</phrase>.</para>
+as seen or copied-and-pasted.</para>
 <para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para>

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