Changeset 305c970

Timestamp:

09/04/2021 12:43:45 AM (21 months ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, multilib, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/glibc-2.37, xry111/kcfg-revise, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/pip3, xry111/queue-11.3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008

Children:

6851fc8

Parents:

f411d2d2

Message:

Minor text changes

Files:

• chapter07/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prologue/why.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter07/introduction.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>This chapter shows how to build the last missing bits of the temporary
-  system: the tools needed by the build machinery of various packages.
-  Now that all circular dependencies
-  have been resolved, we can use a <quote>chroot</quote> environment,
-  completely isolated the host operating system used for the build, except
-  for the running kernel.</para>
+  system: the tools needed by the build machinery of various packages.  Now
+  that all circular dependencies have been resolved, a <quote>chroot</quote>
+  environment, completely isolated from the host operating system (except for
+  the running kernel), can be used for the build.</para>
 
   <para>For proper operation of the isolated environment, some communication

prologue/why.xml

@@ -627 +627 @@
 
         <para>This package contains compression and decompression routines
-        used by some programs. It provide high compression ratios and a very 
+        used by some programs. It provides high compression ratios and a very 
         wide range of compression / speed trade-offs.</para>
       </listitem>