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   <para>This chapter shows how to build the last missing bits of the temporary
-  system: the tools needed by the build machinery of various packages.
-  Now that all circular dependencies
-  have been resolved, we can use a <quote>chroot</quote> environment,
-  completely isolated the host operating system used for the build, except
-  for the running kernel.</para>
+  system: the tools needed by the build machinery of various packages.  Now
+  that all circular dependencies have been resolved, a <quote>chroot</quote>
+  environment, completely isolated from the host operating system (except for
+  the running kernel), can be used for the build.</para>
 
   <para>For proper operation of the isolated environment, some communication