Changeset 32cee45c for chapter06

Timestamp:

05/26/2002 09:25:09 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

fe7f278

Parents:

624fe951

Message:

Applied Alex Groenewoud's namesandspaces.dat patch

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1913 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter06

Files:

• e2fsprogs-exp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• manpages-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• shellutils-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• utillinux-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter06/e2fsprogs-exp.xml

@@ -7 +7 @@
 for example, /usr isn't mounted (like the e2fsck program).  These 
 programs and libraries therefore belong in directories like /lib and 
-/sbin. If this option isn't passed to e2fsprogs' configure, it places 
+/sbin. If this option isn't passed to E2fsprogs's configure, it places 
 these programs in /usr which  is not what we want.</para>
 

chapter06/introduction.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="chapter06"?>
  
-<para>The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward and
-you will probably think it's so much easier and shorter to give the generic 
-installation instructions for each package and only explain how to 
-install something if a certain package requires an alternate installation 
-method. Although I agree on that, I choose to give the 
-full instructions for each and every package. This is simply to avoid any 
+<para>The installation of all the software is pretty straightforward, and
+you will probably think it would be so much easier and shorter to give
+the generic installation instructions for a package here and only explain
+in full the installation of those packages that require an alternate
+method. Although we agree with that, we choose to give the 
+full instructions for each and every package, simply to avoid any 
 possible confusion and errors.</para>
 
 <para>Now would be a good time to take a look at the optimization hint 
-at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/> if you plan on using 
+at <ulink url="&hints-root;optimization.txt"/> if you plan to use 
 compiler optimization for the packages
-installed in the following chapter. Compiler optimization can make a program run
-faster, but may also cause some compilation problems. If you run into problems
-after having used optimization, always try it without optimizing to see if 
+installed in this chapter. Compiler optimization can make a program run
+faster, but may also cause compilation problems. If you run into problems
+when using optimization, always try it without optimization to see if 
 the problem persists.</para>
 
 <para>Please refrain from installing more than one package at a time, even
-if it may safe you time (especially with dual CPU machines). If you install
+if it may save you time (especially with dual CPU machines). If you install
 the wrong package at the wrong time, it may hard-wire program paths to
 <filename class="directory">$LFS/static</filename> which will cause the

chapter06/manpages-inst.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Installation of Man-pages</title>
 
-<para>Install Man-pages by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install Man-pages by running the following command:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>make install</userinput></screen></para>

chapter06/shellutils-inst.xml

@@ -2 +2 @@
 <title>Installation of Sh-utils</title>
 
-<para>Install Shellutils by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install Sh-utils by running the following commands:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>./configure --prefix=/usr &amp;&amp;

chapter06/utillinux-inst.xml

@@ -14 +14 @@
 
 <sect2>
-<title>Installation of Util-Linux</title>
+<title>Installation of Util-linux</title>
 
-<para>Install Util-Linux by running the following commands:</para>
+<para>Install Util-linux by running the following commands:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>./configure &amp;&amp;