Changeset 335838c for chapter05

Timestamp:

05/23/2002 05:01:16 PM (22 years ago)

Author:

Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

46105cf

Parents:

cf24ff1

Message:

missing periods at ends of sentences

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1892 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter05

Files:

• bash-exp.xml (modified) (4 diffs)
• bash-inst.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter05/bash-exp.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 
 <para><userinput>--enable-static-link:</userinput> This configure 
-option causes Bash to be linked statically</para>
+option causes bash to be linked statically.</para>
 
 <para><userinput>--prefix=$LFS/usr:</userinput> This configure option installs 
@@ -16 +16 @@
 execute the boot scripts without a shell for instance).</para>
 
-<para><userinput>--with-curses:</userinput> This causes Bash to be 
+<para><userinput>--with-curses:</userinput> This causes bash to be
 linked against the curses library instead of the default termcap 
 library which is becoming obsolete.</para>
@@ -24 +24 @@
 being just fine because we will reinstall Bash in chapter 6 anyways,
 where we will use libncurses), but it's a good test to make sure that
-the ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
+the Ncurses package has been installed properly. If not, you will get in
 trouble later on in this chapter when you install the Texinfo package.
-That package requires ncurses and termcap can't reliably be used
+That package requires ncurses, and termcap can't reliably be used
 there.</para>
 
@@ -36 +36 @@
 
 <para>The <userinput>&amp;&amp;</userinput>'s at the end of every line cause 
-the next command to be executed only if the previous command exists 
+the next command to be executed only if the previous command exits
 with a return value of 0 indicating success. In case all of these 
-commands are copy&amp;pasted on the shell, it is important to be ensured
-that if ./configure fails, make isn't being executed and, likewise, if make
-fails, that make install isn't being executed, and so forth.</para>
+commands are copy&amp;pasted on the shell, it is important to ensure
+that if ./configure fails, make isn't executed and, likewise, if make
+fails, that make install isn't executed, and so forth.</para>
 
 </sect2>

chapter05/bash-inst.xml

@@ -8 +8 @@
 the instructions of the book version you read exactly.</para>
 
-<para>If both of the files are missing, you have to install the ncurses 
+<para>If both of the files are missing, you have to install the Ncurses
 development package. This package is often called something like 
-<emphasis>ncurses-dev</emphasis>. If this package is already installed, 
+<emphasis>Ncurses-dev</emphasis>. If this package is already installed,
 or you just installed it, check for the two files again. Often the 
 <filename>libcurses.a</filename> file is (still) missing. If so, then