Changeset 33a9421 for chapter02

Timestamp:

02/01/2024 03:55:18 PM (8 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2

Children:

b0b9db56

Parents:

5e67aa3 (diff), d3b0a08 (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/loongarch

Location:

chapter02

Files:

• creatingpartition.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• hostreqs.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• mounting.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• stages.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter02/creatingpartition.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
   disk drive. Create a Linux native partition and a
   <systemitem class="filesystem">swap</systemitem> partition, if needed. Please
-  refer to <filename>cfdisk(8)</filename> or <filename>fdisk(8)</filename> if
+  refer to <ulink role='man' url='&man;cfdisk.8'>cfdisk(8)</ulink> or
+  <ulink role='man' url='&man;fdisk.8'>fdisk(8)</ulink> if
   you do not yet know how to use the programs.</para>
 

chapter02/hostreqs.xml

@@ -30 +30 @@
     modern Linux distributions. Also note that many distributions will
     place software headers into separate packages, often in the form of
-    <quote>&lt;package-name&gt;-devel</quote> or
-    <quote>&lt;package-name&gt;-dev</quote>. Be sure to install those if
-    your distribution provides them.</para>
+    <literal><replaceable>&lt;package-name&gt;</replaceable>-devel</literal>
+    or
+    <literal><replaceable>&lt;package-name&gt;</replaceable>-dev</literal>.
+    Be sure to install those if your distribution provides them.</para>
 
    <para>Earlier versions of the listed software packages may work, but have

chapter02/mounting.xml

@@ -17 +17 @@
   </para>
   
-  <para>Strictly speaking, one cannot "mount a partition". One mounts the <emphasis>file
+  <para>Strictly speaking, one cannot <quote>mount a partition.</quote> One mounts the <emphasis>file
   system</emphasis> embedded in that partition. But since a single partition can't contain
   more than one file system, people often speak of the partition and the

chapter02/stages.xml

@@ -70 +70 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>A few operations, from <quote>Changing Ownership</quote> to
-        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment</quote>, must be done as the
+        <quote>Entering the Chroot Environment,</quote> must be done as the
         <systemitem class="username">root</systemitem> user, with the LFS
         environment variable set for the &root; user.</para>