Changeset 35c2fa60 for appendixa

Timestamp:

10/04/2003 10:19:10 AM (21 years ago)

Author:

Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

ec0ce9c

Parents:

1e66abe

Message:

More miscellaneous adjustments.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2919 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

appendixa

Files:

• bootscripts-shortdesc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gzip-shortdesc.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• vim-alt.xml (deleted)
• vim.xml (modified) (1 diff)

appendixa/bootscripts-shortdesc.xml

@@ -5 +5 @@
 <para>The LFS-Bootscripts package contains SysV init style shell
 scripts. These scripts do various tasks such as check filesystem
-integrity during boot, load keymaps, setup networks and halt
+integrity during boot, load keymaps, set up networks and halt
 processes at shutdown.</para>
 

appendixa/gzip-shortdesc.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <para>(Last checked against version &gzip-contversion;.)</para>
 
-<para>The gzip package contains programs to compress and decompress files
+<para>The Gzip package contains programs to compress and decompress files
 using the Lempel-Ziv coding (LZ77).</para>
 

appendixa/vim.xml

@@ -7 +7 @@
 &aa-vim-down;
 &aa-vim-shortdesc;
-&aa-vim-alt;
 &aa-vim-desc;
 &aa-vim-dep;