Changeset 35c2fa60 for chapter01

Timestamp:

10/04/2003 10:19:10 AM (21 years ago)

Author:

Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

ec0ce9c

Parents:

1e66abe

Message:

More miscellaneous adjustments.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2919 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Location:

chapter01

Files:

• acknowledgements.xml (modified) (11 diffs)
• changelog.xml (modified) (3 diffs)
• how.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/acknowledgements.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:gerard@linuxfromscratch.org">Gerard
-Beekmans</ulink> &lt;gerard@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- LFS Project
-Organization/Leadership.</para></listitem>
+Beekmans</ulink> &lt;gerard@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- Linux-From-Scratch
+initiator, LFS Project organizer.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:matthew@linuxfromscratch.org">Matthew
@@ -29 +29 @@
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:bruce@linuxfromscratch.org">Bruce
 Dubbs</ulink> &lt;bruce@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- LFS Quality Assurance Team
-Leader, BLFS Book editor.</para></listitem>
+leader, BLFS Book editor.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:alex@linuxfromscratch.org">Alex
@@ -37 +37 @@
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:markh@linuxfromscratch.org">Mark
 Hymers</ulink> &lt;markh@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- CVS maintainer, BLFS Book
-Creator, former LFS Book editor.</para></listitem>
+creator, former LFS Book editor.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:iwanek@linuxfromscratch.org">James
 Iwanek</ulink> &lt;iwanek@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- System Administration
-team member.</para></listitem>
+Team member.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:nicholas@linuxfromscratch.org">Nicholas
@@ -53 +53 @@
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:bill@linuxfromscratch.org">Bill
 Maltby</ulink> &lt;bill@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- LFS Project
-Organization/Leadership.</para></listitem>
+organizer.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:scot@linuxfromscratch.org">Scot Mc
@@ -60 +60 @@
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:ryan@linuxfromscratch.org">Ryan
-Oliver</ulink> &lt;ryan@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- Testing Team Leader, co-
-creator of PLFS.</para></listitem>
+Oliver</ulink> &lt;ryan@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- Testing Team leader,
+co-creator of PLFS.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:jwrober@linuxfromscratch.org">James
@@ -68 +68 @@
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:greg@linuxfromscratch.org">Greg
-Schafer</ulink> &lt;greg@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- Toolchain Maintainer,
+Schafer</ulink> &lt;greg@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- Toolchain maintainer,
 LFS Book editor, co-creator of PLFS.</para></listitem>
 
@@ -166 +166 @@
 mirror.</para></listitem>
 
+<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:guido@primerelay.net">Guido Passet</ulink>
+&lt;guido@primerelay.net&gt; -- nl.linuxfromscratch.org
+mirror.</para></listitem>
+
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:miha@xuy.biz">Mikhail Pastukhov</ulink>
 &lt;miha@xuy.biz&gt; -- lfs.130th.net mirror.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:guido@primerelay.net">Guido Passet</ulink>
-&lt;guido@primerelay.net&gt; -- nl.linuxfromscratch.org
-mirror.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:jpolen@rackspace.com">Jeremy Polen</ulink>
@@ -234 +234 @@
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:strider@linux.com">Mark Stone</ulink> for 
-donating shadowfax, the linuxfromscratch.org server.</para></listitem>
+donating <emphasis>shadowfax</emphasis>, the first linuxfromscratch.org
+server.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse
 Tie-Ten-Quee</ulink> &lt;highos@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; for donating a Yamaha
-CDRW 8824E cd writer.</para></listitem>
+CDRW 8824E CD-writer.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>Countless other people on the various LFS mailinglists who are
-making this book happen by giving their suggestions, testing the book and
-submitting bug reports.</para></listitem>
+making this book happen by giving their suggestions, submitting bug reports,
+and throwing in their criticism.</para></listitem>
 
 </itemizedlist>
@@ -257 +258 @@
 Project maintainer.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>Robert Briggs for originally donating the linuxfromscratch.org
-and linuxfromscratch.com domain names.</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>Robert Briggs for originally donating the
+<emphasis>linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> and
+<emphasis>linuxfromscratch.com</emphasis> domain names.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:ian@ichilton.co.uk">Ian Chilton</ulink>
-&lt;ian@ichilton.co.uk&gt; for maintaining the Hints project</para></listitem>
+&lt;ian@ichilton.co.uk&gt; for maintaining the Hints project.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:gimli@linuxfromscratch.org">Marc
@@ -269 +271 @@
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:sklein@linuxfromscratch.org">Seth W.
 Klein</ulink> &lt;sklein@linuxfromscratch.org&gt; -- LFS FAQ
-Creator.</para></listitem>
+creator.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:garrett@linuxart.com">Garrett
@@ -281 +283 @@
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:Geert.Poels@skynet.be">Geert Poels</ulink>
 &lt;Geert.Poels@skynet.be&gt; -- Original BLFS banner creator; based on the
-original LFS banner by Garrett LeSage.</para></listitem>
-
-<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:bkenoah@oswd.org">Frank Skettino</ulink> 
-&lt;bkenoah@oswd.org&gt; -- Initial design of the old website - <ulink 
-url="http://www.oswd.org">OSWD</ulink>.</para></listitem>
+LFS banner by Garrett LeSage.</para></listitem>
+
+<listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:bkenoah@oswd.org">Frank Skettino</ulink>
+&lt;bkenoah@oswd.org&gt; for the initial design of the old website -- have a
+look at <ulink url="http://www.oswd.org/"/>.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para><ulink url="mailto:highos@linuxfromscratch.org">Jesse

chapter01/changelog.xml

@@ -116 +116 @@
 
 <listitem><para>September 26th, 2003 [jeremy]: Added new workaround for the
-devpts problems</para></listitem>
+devpts problems.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 24th, 2003 [greg]: Various changes across the board
@@ -128 +128 @@
 
 <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jeremy]: Added net-tools patch to fix
-mii-tool compilation</para></listitem>
+mii-tool compilation.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 22nd, 2003 [jwrober]: Chapter 5 - Updated the Why 
@@ -173 +173 @@
 page to match the website.</para></listitem>
 
-<listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded File to 4.04</para></listitem>
+<listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Upgraded File to 4.04.</para></listitem>
 
 <listitem><para>September 17th, 2003 [jeremy]: Chapter 6 - changed 2 of the

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -3 +3 @@
 <?dbhtml filename="how.html" dir="chapter01"?>
 
-<para>You are going to build your LFS system by using a previously installed 
-Linux distribution such as Debian, Mandrake, Red Hat, etc. The existing Linux 
-system (host) will be used as a starting point, because you will need programs 
-like a compiler, linker, text editor, and other development tools to build the 
-new system. Ordinarily, the required tools are available by default if you 
-selected <quote>development</quote> as one of your installation options when 
-you installed your Linux distribution.</para>
+<para>You are going to build your LFS system by using a previously installed
+Linux distribution (such as Debian, Mandrake, Red Hat, or SuSE). This existing
+Linux system (the host) will be used as a starting point, because you will need
+programs like a compiler, linker and shell to build the new system. Normally
+all the required tools are available if you selected <quote>development</quote>
+as one of the options when you installed your distribution.</para>
 
-<para>After you have downloaded the packages that make up an LFS system, you 
-will create a new Linux native partition and filesystem. This new Linux 
-partition and filesystem is where your new LFS system will be compiled and 
-installed onto.</para>
+<para>In Chapter 3 you will first create a new Linux native partition and
+filesystem, the place where your new LFS system will be compiled and installed.
+Then in Chapter 4 you download all the packages and patches required to build
+an LFS system, and store them on the new filesystem.</para>
 
 <para>Chapter 5 will then discuss the installation of a number of packages that 
@@ -69 +68 @@
 
 <para>When all the software from Chapter 6 is installed, the temporary tools 
-built in Chapter 5 will be removed. Chapters 7, 8 and 9 will finalize the 
-installation. The bootscripts are setup in Chapter 7, the kernel and boot 
-loader are setup in Chapter 8 and Chapter 9 has some pointers to help you after 
-you finish with the book.  Then, finally, you reboot your computer into your 
-new LFS system.</para>
+built in Chapter 5 are removed. In Chapters 7, 8 and 9 the installation will
+then be finalized. The bootscripts are set up in Chapter 7, the kernel and
+bootloader are set up in Chapter 8, and Chapter 9 has some pointers to help
+you after you finish the book.  Then, finally, you're ready to reboot your
+computer into your new LFS system.</para>
 
 <para>This is the process in a nutshell. Detailed information on the steps you