Changeset 360371a

Timestamp:

05/29/2023 12:57:28 AM (4 months ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

12.0, 12.0-rc1, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/parallelism

Children:

732ce30, 87fbad7

Parents:

d0da969c

Message:

Minor rewording

File:

• chapter08/pkgmgt.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter08/pkgmgt.xml

@@ -127 +127 @@
       library):</para>
 
-<screen role="nodump"><userinput>grep -l  -e '<replaceable>libfoo</replaceable>.*deleted' /proc/*/maps |
-   tr -cd 0-9\\n | xargs -r ps u</userinput></screen>
+<screen role="nodump"><userinput>grep -l '<replaceable>libfoo</replaceable>.*deleted' /proc/*/maps | tr -cd 0-9\\n | xargs -r ps u</userinput></screen>
 
       <para>
@@ -134 +133 @@
         the system and it is linked to the updated library, you must
         restart the <command>sshd</command> service, then logout, login again,
-        and rerun the preceding ps command to confirm that nothing is still using the
+        and run the preceding command again to confirm that nothing is still using the
         deleted libraries.
       </para>