Changeset 360fdfca for chapter08

Timestamp:

01/26/2024 05:28:53 PM (8 months ago)

Author:

Pierre Labastie <pierre.labastie@…>

Branches:

12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, multilib, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

0d80918a, f6a43f6

Parents:

44850bb

Message:

Fix punctuation in quotes, and quote signs

• period and comma inside quotes
• " to <quote>
• some " to <literal> when it is a var value

Location:

chapter08

Files:

• coreutils.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• expect.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• gmp.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• stripping.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter08/coreutils.xml

@@ -1262 +1262 @@
         <term><command>yes</command></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Repeatedly outputs <quote>y</quote>, or a given string, until
+          <para>Repeatedly outputs <quote>y,</quote> or a given string, until
           killed</para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-coreutils yes">

chapter08/expect.xml

@@ -93 +93 @@
 
     <para>If any test fails with the message
-    <quote><computeroutput>The system has no more ptys.  Ask your system
-    administrator to create more</computeroutput></quote>, it indicates
+    <quote><computeroutput>The system has no more ptys. Ask your system
+    administrator to create more</computeroutput>,</quote> it indicates
     you've not mounted the
     <systemitem class="filesystem">devpts</systemitem> file system

chapter08/gmp.xml

@@ -59 +59 @@
 
       <!-- To editors: the configure script says "the none host is obsolete,
-           use - -disable-assembly", but don't believe it: with the latter
+           use - -disable-assembly," but don't believe it: with the latter
            CFLAGS is still automatically set to -march=something.  -->
     </note>
@@ -107 +107 @@
     it is built. Occasionally, the code that detects the processor misidentifies
     the system capabilities and there will be errors in the tests or other
-    applications using the gmp libraries with the message "Illegal
-    instruction".  In this case, gmp should be reconfigured with the option
+    applications using the gmp libraries with the message
+    <computeroutput>Illegal instruction</computeroutput>.
+    In this case, gmp should be reconfigured with the option
     <option>--host=none-linux-gnu</option> and rebuilt.</para></caution>
 

chapter08/stripping.xml

@@ -53 +53 @@
   and ld-linux.so.2 on 32-bit systems.  The construct below selects the
   correct name for the current architecture, excluding anything ending
-  with <quote>g</quote>, in case the commands below have already been
+  with <quote>g,</quote> in case the commands below have already been
   run.</para></note>