Changeset 37b5ac1

Timestamp:

06/12/2020 10:03:30 PM (4 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

94ec149

Parents:

4234aea6

Message:

Finish review/update to cross2 book

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/cross2@11931 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter10/grub.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• chapter10/introduction.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter11/reboot.xml (modified) (2 diffs)
• chapter11/theend.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter11/whatnow.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter10/grub.xml

@@ -21 +21 @@
 
     <warning><para>Configuring GRUB incorrectly can render your system
-    inoperable without an alternate boot device such as a CD-ROM.  This
-    section is not required to boot your LFS system.  You may just
-    want to modify your current boot loader, e.g. Grub-Legacy, GRUB2, or
+    inoperable without an alternate boot device such as a CD-ROM or bootable
+    USB drive. This section is not required to boot your LFS system.  You may
+    just want to modify your current boot loader, e.g. Grub-Legacy, GRUB2, or
     LILO.</para></warning>
-
 
     <para> Ensure that an emergency boot disk is ready to <quote>rescue</quote>
@@ -84 +83 @@
     <para>The location of the boot partition is a choice of the user that
     affects the configuration.  One recommendation is to have a separate small
-    (suggested size is 100 MB) partition just for boot information.  That way
+    (suggested size is 200 MB) partition just for boot information.  That way
     each build, whether LFS or some commercial distro, can access the same boot
     files and access can be made from any booted system.  If you choose to do

chapter10/introduction.xml

@@ -12 +12 @@
 
   <para>It is time to make the LFS system bootable. This chapter
-  discusses creating an <filename>fstab</filename> file, building a
+  discusses creating the <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> file, building a
   kernel for the new LFS system, and installing the GRUB boot loader so
   that the LFS system can be selected for booting at startup.</para>

chapter11/reboot.xml

@@ -90 +90 @@
 umount -v $LFS/sys</userinput></screen>
 
-  <para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
-
-<screen><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
-
   <para>If multiple partitions were created, unmount the other
   partitions before unmounting the main one, like this:</para>
@@ -100 +96 @@
 umount -v $LFS/home
 umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
+
+  <para>Unmount the LFS file system itself:</para>
+
+<screen><userinput>umount -v $LFS</userinput></screen>
 
   <para>Now, reboot the system with:</para>

chapter11/theend.xml

@@ -37 +37 @@
 
   <para>Two files describing the installed system may be used by packages
-  that will be installed on the system, either in binary form or by building
+  that can be installed on the system later, either in binary form or by building
   them.</para>
 

chapter11/whatnow.xml

@@ -58 +58 @@
       <para>The Beyond Linux From Scratch book covers installation
       procedures for a wide range of software beyond the scope of the LFS
-      Book. The BLFS project is located at <ulink url="&blfs-root;"/>.</para>
+      Book. The BLFS project is located at <ulink url="&blfs-book;"/>.</para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -66 +66 @@
       <para>The LFS Hints are a collection of educational documents
       submitted by volunteers in the LFS community. The hints are available
-      at <ulink url="&hints-index;"/>.</para>
+      at <ulink url="&hints-root;"/>.</para>
     </listitem>