Changeset 37e35d2 for chapter09/systemd-custom.xml

Timestamp:

06/29/2020 07:55:01 AM (4 years ago)

Author:

Thomas Trepl <thomas@…>

Branches:

multilib-10.1

Children:

c4804e8

Parents:

d4fdde6

Message:

Update to new lfs structure

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/branches/multilib@11986 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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• chapter09/systemd-custom.xml (moved) (moved from chapter07/systemd-custom.xml ) (12 diffs)

chapter09/systemd-custom.xml

@@ -50 +50 @@
 
     <para>By default, <filename class="directory">/tmp</filename> is created as
-    a tmpfs. If this is not desired, it can be overridden by the following:</para>
+    a tmpfs. If this is not desired, it can be overridden by executing the 
+    following command:</para>
 
 <screen role="nodump"><userinput>ln -sfv /dev/null /etc/systemd/system/tmp.mount</userinput></screen>
@@ -56 +57 @@
     <para>Alternatively, if a a separate partition for
     <filename class="directory">/tmp</filename> is desired, specify that 
-    partition in an <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> entry.</para>
+    partition in a <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> entry.</para>
 
     <warning>
@@ -88 +89 @@
     files with the same name in
     <filename class="directory">/usr/lib/tmpfiles.d</filename>. See
-    <filename>tmpfiles.d(5)</filename> manual page  for file format
+    <filename>tmpfiles.d(5)</filename> manual page for file format
     details.</para>
 
@@ -104 +105 @@
       which in turn references type d (directory). This then creates the
       specified directory if is is not present and adjusts the permissions
-      and ownership as specified.  Contents of the directory will be
+      and ownership as specified. Contents of the directory will be
       subject to time based cleanup if the age argument is specified.
      </para>
@@ -122 +123 @@
     <title>Overriding Default Services Behavior</title>
 
-    <para>The parameter of a unit can be overriden by creating a directory
+    <para>The parameters of a unit can be overriden by creating a directory
     and a configuration file in <filename
     class="directory">/etc/systemd/system</filename>. For example:</para>
@@ -181 +182 @@
     <para>Logging on a system booted with systemd is handled with
     systemd-journald (by default), rather than a typical unix syslog daemon.
-    You can also add a normal syslog daemon and have both work side by
+    You can also add a normal syslog daemon and have both operate side by
     side if desired. The systemd-journald program stores journal entries in a
     binary format rather than a plain text log file. To assist with
@@ -203 +204 @@
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
-         <para><command>journalctl -f</command>: povides functionality similar
+         <para><command>journalctl -f</command>: provides functionality similar
          to tail -f (follow).</para>
        </listitem>
@@ -216 +217 @@
     when a daemon process crashes. On systemd booted systems the core
     dumping is handled by <command>systemd-coredump</command>.  It will
-    log the core dump into the journal and store the core dump itself in
+    log the core dump in the journal and store the core dump itself in
     <filename class="directory">/var/lib/systemd/coredump</filename>.
-    To retrieve and process core dumps, <command>coredumpctl</command>
+    To retrieve and process core dumps, the <command>coredumpctl</command>
     tool is provided.  Here are some examples of frequently used commands:
     </para>
@@ -225 +226 @@
       <listitem>
         <para><command>coredumpctl -r</command>: lists all core dumps in
-        reversed chronological order.</para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para><command>coredumpctl -1 info</command>: show the information
-        of the last core dump.</para>
-      </listitem>
-      <listitem>
-        <para><command>coredumpctl -1 debug</command>: load the last core
+        reverse chronological order.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para><command>coredumpctl -1 info</command>: shows the information
+        from the last core dump.</para>
+      </listitem>
+      <listitem>
+        <para><command>coredumpctl -1 debug</command>: loads the last core
         dump into <ulink url="&blfs-book;general/gdb.html">GDB</ulink>.
         </para>
@@ -250 +251 @@
 EOF</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>See <filename>systemd-coredump(8)</filename>,
+    <para>See the <filename>systemd-coredump(8)</filename>,
     <filename>coredumpctl(1)</filename>, and
     <filename>coredump.conf.d(5)</filename> manual pages for more
@@ -285 +286 @@
           after the user session has ended, but breaks backwards compatibility
           with tools like <command>nohup</command> and utilities that use
-          <function>deamon()</function>.
+          <function>daemon()</function>.
         </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -299 +300 @@
       <listitem>
         <para>
-          <emphasis>Disable at build-time</emphasis>: You can enable
+          <emphasis>Disable at build-time</emphasis>: You can disable
           lingering by default while building systemd by adding the switch
           <parameter>-Ddefault-kill-user-processes=false</parameter> to the