Changeset 39d9ed8 for chapter08/stripping.xml

Timestamp:

04/01/2023 01:06:22 PM (18 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

7a570bd

Parents:

6bced9f (diff), fd531b84 (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

File:

• chapter08/stripping.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter08/stripping.xml

@@ -55 +55 @@
   <important>
     <para>
-      If any package of which the version is different from the version
+      If there is any package whose version is different from the version
       specified by the book (either following a security advisory or
       satisfying personal preference), it may be necessary to update the
-      the library file name in <envar>save_usrlib</envar> or
+      library file name in <envar>save_usrlib</envar> or
       <envar>online_usrlib</envar>.
       <emphasis role='bold'>Failing to do so may render the system