Changeset 4ceb3a1 for appendixa


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Timestamp:
05/29/2002 11:15:53 PM (22 years ago)
Author:
Gerard Beekmans <gerard@…>
Branches:
10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v4_0, v4_1, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc
Children:
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Parents:
159c2d2
Message:

applied Alex's listed-items.patch

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1942 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

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appendixa
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  • appendixa/glibc-desc.xml

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    186186advantages:</para>
    187187<itemizedlist>
    188 <listitem><para>Contributors can add new services without adding them to
    189 GNU C Library.</para></listitem>
    190 <listitem><para>The modules can be updated separately.</para></listitem>
    191 <listitem><para>The C library image is smaller.</para></listitem>
     188<listitem><para>contributors can add new services without adding them to
     189GNU C library,</para></listitem>
     190<listitem><para>the modules can be updated separately,</para></listitem>
     191<listitem><para>the C library image is smaller.</para></listitem>
    192192</itemizedlist></sect4>
    193193

  • appendixa/introduction.xml

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    33<?dbhtml filename="introduction.html" dir="appendixa"?>
    44
    5 <para>This appendix describes the following aspects of every package
    6 that is installed in this book:</para>
     5<para>In this appendix the following aspects of every package
     6installed in this book are described:</para>
    77
    88<itemizedlist>
    99
    10 <listitem><para>The official download location for the
    11 package.</para></listitem>
     10<listitem><para>the official download location for the
     11package,</para></listitem>
    1212
    13 <listitem><para>What the package contains.</para></listitem>
     13<listitem><para>what the package contains,</para></listitem>
    1414
    15 <listitem><para>What each program from a package does.</para></listitem>
     15<listitem><para>what each program from the package does,</para></listitem>
    1616
    17 <listitem><para>What each package needs to compile.</para></listitem>
     17<listitem><para>what the package needs to be compiled.</para></listitem>
    1818
    1919</itemizedlist>
    2020
    2121<para>Most information about these packages (especially the descriptions of
    22 them) come from the man pages from those packages. We are not going to print
    23 the entire man page, just the core elements to make it possible to
    24 understand what a program does. To get knowledge of all details on a program,
    25 we suggest you start by reading the complete man page in addition to
    26 this appendix.</para>
     22them) come from the man pages of those packages. We do not include
     23the entire man page, but just some key elements to make it possible to
     24understand what a program does. To get information on all details of a program,
     25please refer to its man page or info page.</para>
    2726
    2827<para>Certain packages are documented in more depth
    2928than others, because we just happen to know more about certain
    30 packages than I know about others. If anything should be added to the
     29packages than about others. If you think anything should be added to the
    3130following descriptions, please don't hesitate to email the mailing
    3231lists.  We intend that the list should contain an in-depth description
    … …  
    4645
    4746<para>The dependency list can be, from time to time, outdated in regards
    48 to the current used package version. Checking dependencies takes quite a
     47to the currently used package version. Checking dependencies takes quite a
    4948bit of work, so they may lag behind a bit on the package update. But
    5049often with minor package updates, the installation dependencies hardly
    51 change, so they'll be current in most cases. If we upgrade to a major
    52 new release, we'll make sure the dependencies are checked too at the
    53 same time.</para>
     50change, so they'll be current in most cases. When we upgrade to a major
     51new release, we'll make sure the dependencies are checked too.</para>
    5452
    5553</sect1>
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