Changeset 4f2d19e5

Timestamp:

09/25/2014 02:22:24 AM (10 years ago)

Author:

Bruce Dubbs <bdubbs@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 7.7, 7.8, 7.9, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/mips64el, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

7da0af6

Parents:

2ee5044

Message:

Minor text changes

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@10763 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

Files:

• chapter01/askforhelp.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• chapter01/how.xml (modified) (1 diff)
• prologue/hostreqs.xml (modified) (1 diff)

chapter01/askforhelp.xml

@@ -45 +45 @@
       </listitem>
       <listitem>
-        <para>The output from the <xref linkend='version-check'/></para>
+        <para>The output from the <xref linkend='version-check'/> script</para>
       </listitem>
       <listitem>

chapter01/how.xml

@@ -75 +75 @@
   set to the LFS partition. This is very similar to rebooting and instructing
   the kernel to mount the LFS partition as the root partition. The system
-  does not actually reboot, but instead <command>chroot</command>'s because
+  does not actually reboot, but instead uses <command>chroot</command> because
   creating a bootable system requires additional work which is not necessary
   just yet. The major advantage is that <quote>chrooting</quote> allows you

prologue/hostreqs.xml

@@ -148 +148 @@
 
   <!-- Use an empty sect2 element to prevent a pdf warning.  -->
-  <sect2 id="version-check">
+  <sect2 id="version-check" xreflabel="Section vii, Host System Requirements">
   <title> </title>