Changeset 51c7e26f for chapter01/contactinfo.xml

Timestamp:

10/09/2003 10:35:55 PM (21 years ago)

Author:

Alex Gronenwoud <alex@…>

Branches:

10.0, 10.0-rc1, 10.1, 10.1-rc1, 11.0, 11.0-rc1, 11.0-rc2, 11.0-rc3, 11.1, 11.1-rc1, 11.2, 11.2-rc1, 11.3, 11.3-rc1, 12.0, 12.0-rc1, 12.1, 12.1-rc1, 12.2, 12.2-rc1, 6.0, 6.1, 6.1.1, 6.3, 6.4, 6.5, 6.6, 6.7, 6.8, 7.0, 7.1, 7.2, 7.3, 7.4, 7.5, 7.5-systemd, 7.6, 7.6-systemd, 7.7, 7.7-systemd, 7.8, 7.8-systemd, 7.9, 7.9-systemd, 8.0, 8.1, 8.2, 8.3, 8.4, 9.0, 9.1, arm, bdubbs/gcc13, ml-11.0, multilib, renodr/libudev-from-systemd, s6-init, trunk, v5_0, v5_1, v5_1_1, xry111/arm64, xry111/arm64-12.0, xry111/clfs-ng, xry111/lfs-next, xry111/loongarch, xry111/loongarch-12.0, xry111/loongarch-12.1, xry111/loongarch-12.2, xry111/mips64el, xry111/multilib, xry111/pip3, xry111/rust-wip-20221008, xry111/update-glibc

Children:

1a7aecc6

Parents:

c1e4223

Message:

Minor brush-ups, and splitting the basic-net section.

git-svn-id: ​http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@2956 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

File:

• chapter01/contactinfo.xml (modified) (2 diffs)

chapter01/contactinfo.xml

@@ -7 +7 @@
 <title>FAQ</title>
 
-<para>If you encounter any errors, have any questions, or if you find a
-typo in the book, then, please consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions)
-page at <ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para>
+<para>If during the building of your LFS system you encounter any errors, or
+have any questions, or think you found a typo in the book, then please first
+consult the FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions) at
+<ulink url="http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/faq/"/>.</para>
 
 </sect2>
+
 
 <sect2 id="ch01-irc">
 <title>IRC</title>
 
-<para>Members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community IRC
-server.  If you decide to utilize this mode of support, we ask that you
-at least ensure you've checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives
-for the answer to your question.  You can find the IRC server at
-irc.linuxfromscratch.org port 6667.  The support channel is named
-#LFS-support.</para>
+<para>Several members of the LFS community offer assistance on our community
+IRC server. Before you utilize this mode of support, we ask that you've
+at least checked the LFS FAQ and the mailing list archives for the answer to
+your question.  You can find the IRC server at
+<emphasis>irc.linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> port 6667.  The support channel
+is named #LFS-support.</para>
 
 </sect2>
@@ -30 +32 @@
 
 <para>The <emphasis>linuxfromscratch.org</emphasis> server is hosting a number
-of mailinglists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists
+of mailing lists used for the development of the LFS project. These lists
 include, among others, the main development and support lists.</para>