Changeset 524c5e3 for chapter08/wheel.xml

Timestamp:

12/09/2022 07:53:16 AM (17 months ago)

Author:

Xi Ruoyao <xry111@…>

Branches:

xry111/clfs-ng

Children:

f16e611

Parents:

2ef64c4 (diff), 4640b37d (diff)
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Message:

Merge remote-tracking branch 'origin/trunk' into xry111/clfs-ng

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• chapter08/wheel.xml (modified) (7 diffs)

chapter08/wheel.xml

@@ -41 +41 @@
     <title>Installation of Wheel</title>
 
-    <para>Compile wheel with the following command:</para>
+    <para>Compile Wheel with the following command:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="make">PYTHONPATH=src pip3 wheel -w dist --no-build-isolation --no-deps $PWD</userinput></screen>
 
-    <para>Install wheel with the following command:</para>
+    <para>Install Wheel with the following command:</para>
 
 <screen><userinput remap="install">pip3 install --no-index --find-links=dist wheel</userinput></screen>
 
     <variablelist>
-      <title>The meaning of the pip3 commands:</title>
+      <title>The meaning of the pip3 configuration options and commands:</title>
 
       <varlistentry>
         <term><envar>PYTHONPATH=src</envar></term>
         <listitem>
-           <para>Allow using this package (not installed yet) to build a
+           <para>Allows this package (not installed yet) to build a
            wheel archive for itself, to avoid a chicken-or-egg problem.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -63 +63 @@
         <term><command>wheel</command></term>
         <listitem>
-           <para>Build wheel archive for this package.</para>
+           <para>This command builds the wheel archive for this package.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -70 +70 @@
         <term><parameter>-w dist</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-           <para>Put the created wheels into the
+           <para>Instructs pip to put the created wheel into the
            <filename class='directory'>dist</filename> directory.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -78 +78 @@
         <term><command>install</command></term>
         <listitem>
-           <para>Install the package.</para>
+           <para>This command installs the package.</para>
         </listitem>
       </varlistentry>
@@ -87 +87 @@
               <parameter>--no-index</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-          <para>Prevent pip from fetching files from the online package
+          <para>These options prevent fetching files from the online package
           repository (PyPI). If packages are installed in the correct order,
-          then it won't need to fetch any files in the first place, but these
+          pip won't need to fetch any files in the first place; these
           options add some safety in case of user error.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -97 +97 @@
         <term><parameter>--find-links dist</parameter></term>
         <listitem>
-           <para>Search wheel archives from the
+           <para>Instructs pip to search for wheel archives in the
            <filename class='directory'>dist</filename> directory.</para>
         </listitem>
@@ -129 +129 @@
         <listitem>
           <para>
-            is an utility to unpack, pack, or convert wheel packages
+            is a utility to unpack, pack, or convert wheel archives
           </para>
           <indexterm zone="ch-system-wheel">